Nimblegalaxy

is this book dropped then

i would like to add one more thing please develop mc's dungeon as it is a story about a dungeon master. if you need some inspiration about that then there is the novel " dungeon without a system" on a royal road it had 40 chaps last I checked might give you direction for the dungeon.

I thought there was different religion given that gods are different there in chapter 1

I think that author should start to develop a dungeon like a dungeon in a fantasy story. given the story title content till now is starting to deviate far too much

here aros stated himself has "c rank enemy" which sounds a bit weird in that place he could have said dragonling , beast etc, "enemy" just doesn't fit here.

just my thought isn't using dungeon monster or even monster is a better term than enemy for "beings of the dungeon"

although I liked the concept of the story I would like to mention a few points 1. story Is progressing very fast-paced in the development of modern techs without much reference to how mc developed it( even though he doesn't have much of a cheat other than the memory of a world in form of a dream). 2. I am getting that you are trying to make a villain of that anti magic faction but they are creating trouble when MC is a non-magic person is not getting to me. 3. I still don't have a proper image of your world in 9 chaps. 4. I think you should read "i-m-the-king-of-technology" just for reference.

https://comrademao.com/novel/legendary-pet-shop/

twice or half

yeah, most of the monster invasion or apocalypse novels turned out to be in similar formate. out of all, I have read only Worlds' Apocalypse Online is the one I slightly liked compared to the other.