Kelly111

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It's a boring read. Author makes a pretty good character but the biggest problem I have is that there wouldn't be a difference if there was no reincarnation. The MC feels and acts like an average or below average intelligent OC. Simple fact of the matter is that it shouldn't take so long to learn some things especially with the adult mind and the brain plasticity(not sure if its the right word) of a child. Obviously his initial situation is a problem but still shouldn't be as big of a problem either the author is making things unnecessarily difficult or the protag just sucks. Then again this is a free fanfic and I usually like this authors work. So maybe there's something I missed or this novel just isn't for me.

If its thought operated it should be able to detect intent

Good book. The only thing I can say you missed is him having the ability to brainwash himself and others to do things they wouldn't be able to do normally. Like tearing your muscles to punch above your weight class or somehow programming certain reflexes into your subconscious.

The vow negates itself. So power boost if people don't know about it and no power boost when they know. I imagine it's a stronger power boost than the one regular sorcerers gain from explaining their powers. Since he loses the boost when 10 people have found out about it.

It took Jariaya 6 months to learn the rasengan compared to narutos one and Jariaya has reserves larger the jonin levels. The most important factor of the rasengan is control not chakra capacity. The clone jutsu is not similar to the shadow clone in terms of mechanics. The clone jutsu is more of a genjutsu than the clone jutsu thats why naruto failed he can't accomplish the kind of chakra control needed for genjutsu. Also have you seen his replacement and transformation jutsu only Sasuke can match him. In terms of brain smart he was a bit of an idiot but any area naruto applied himself he excelled massively that's why he's a savant.

Also naruto was water walking albeit awfully before the seal was removed on boiling hot water.

By that logic every jutsu should be easy for naruto because he can "spam it till he gets it right" that's what learning is doing something till you get it right. No that's not what happened he figured out the shadow clone jutsu and got it on his 3rd or 4th try also what do you mean "when you get used to it". Getting used to something is part of the learning process that's like saying differentiation is hard but when you get used to it, it's like factorisation. It's still hard to learn. Notice how you didn't say anything about the rasengan an attack that's basically an advanced form of chakra control.

Naruto is a genius savant who learnt a kinjutsu in an afternoon learnt how to tree walk in a week although he had 100 times the chakra reserves sasuke did. He also learnt how to water walk even when orichimaru messed with his seal. He learnt the rasengan in a week albeit an incomplete form it was basically at 90% completion. It is accepted fact that he is more talented than sasuke in the fandom making him the most talented ninja of his generation. Don't compare our protagonist or the average ninja to him

Also in some universes the fact that the reincarnate isn't found out is really unrealistic