The_Tower

I am the author and I hope you enjoy it. We all will just have to wait for cuttlefish to start the second book. I hope this will tied you over until then, and hopeful spark better fanfiction to be written. After this gets longer I will add it to Space Battles forum

Nah I dont think you should add numbers every time you mention their rank. For one it will interfere with the flow of the story. I never read the breaker and rarly cultivation novels and I have no trouble with the rankings.

... Didn’t Ash’s mom not have Mr. Mime when he was younger? I seem to remember an episode about that.

I am giving his a 5 star rating because its writing quality is better than 95% of the storys on here, but be careful reading this because its a male soul choosing to become a female and the proptly continues crushing on Naruto. So, future reads be warned.

Ok... male romances Naruto is not what i want to see thanks

Well... As a man I would have not chosen to become a girl no matter what the other choices were, but I guess the author is different. I just hope it wont be weird with a romance or something to Naruto. Although, man soul hinata and sakura... it has possibilities.

I would vote you a powerstone for this chapter, but I used that up already today.

I wonder...

The author here. I am giving my own story a 5 star review. It is certainly better than some of the stories on webnovel with a 5 star rating.

Density compression into black hole!?!