zozzythebeast123

Screw you web novels .com. This was such a great novel. one of my alltime favorites. If not my number 1 favorite. Then you had to come along. Get the translator to use your site. Then end up basicaly droping the story. It's only gotten like 25 chapters in 2 years. web novels kills yet another great novel. Main reason why i no longer suport this site.

If your new to web novels you will probably like this novel. those of you like me who have read dozens this novel probably isn't for you. The best way I would describe it is everything seems really shallow at best. it has no depth to it and the writing is subpar compared to most decent novels. Every sentence has to much or to little. With the writer adding completely pointless info into almost everything. just one example being "mask of mischief what a peculiar name, Long chen thought in his mind as he went threw this knowledge." is there a need to add in his mind. can't be "mask of mischief what a peculiar name, Long chen thought as he sorted out the information he received." idk maybe the writer thinks most people are to stupid to figure out that thought takes place in the mind and we cant make that connection without reading it. that's just a small example. Wouldn't be a big deal except you find things like that in almost every sentence and paragraph. Every time he thinks to himself his names long chen but anytime he talks to someone or vise versa it's long tian. another problem instead of using pronouns like he, him, his they use long chen almost every single time. long chen got up in the morning as long chen looked in the mirror. long chen thinking to himself yada yada yada like that. its unbelievably frustrating. Pick a name and stop using it so much it seems like the author believes every time they do there saving a childs life.

wow for a county that was saved in ww2 by america. rose from 3rd world to today because of business from america. stole most of there ideas and tek from america. and would collapse if they stopped trading with america. they sure don't like americans.

nope author is not the translator author is up to chapter 1263 but i cant read Chinese and machine translations suck

I know right the author stole $50 from me that's why I'm warning everyone such a great novel but such a scum bag translator

what she can't walk herself or one of the hundreds of other girls in his ring or lingkong can't take her it has to be him for some reason

then stop putting untranslated chapters to make people pay more or take down the 25 advanced chapters option until you get caught up or just don't put any new chapters up till there ready it makes people feel like there being cheated with what's being done now

DON'T GET THE ADVANCED CHAPTERS THEY ARE POSTING UNTRANSLATED CHAPTERS TO GET YOU TO SPEND MORE MONEY WITHOUT GIVING YOU WHAT YOU PAID FOR. THE LAST 9 CHAPTERS ARE IN CHINESE. ITS MARKETING FRAUD IN MY BOOK

DON'T GET THE ADVANCED CHAPTERS THEY ARE POSTING UNTRANSLATED CHAPTERS TO GET YOU TO SPEND MORE MONEY WITHOUT GIVING YOU WHAT YOU PAID FOR. THE LAST 9 CHAPTERS ARE IN CHINESE. ITS MARKETING FRAUD IN MY BOOK

DON'T GET THE ADVANCED CHAPTERS THEY ARE POSTING UNTRANSLATED CHAPTERS TO GET YOU TO SPEND MORE MONEY WITHOUT GIVING YOU WHAT YOU PAID FOR. THE LAST 9 CHAPTERS ARE IN CHINESE. ITS MARKETING FRAUD IN MY BOOK