NoIamnotdrunk

Just read up until here, and I am not sure if you use the word choir correctly. I think what you mean is chore. As in, work you dont want to do. Not a bunch of singing people, choir.

This is really a top tier book so far. I didnt notice any sort of bad writing quality, but I am also not particulary picky. Since there are only 19 chapters out atm, I cant really judge, but what I can say is, that the chapters are all VERY long. I really love that. They also dont feel stuffed or as if he tries to reach some wordcount, so I am happy. Cant say much about the story yet, but so far its very solid. However, my only negative point with this is that there will be no romance according to the tags, which is actually a shame. I dont need a harem or anything, but a book is just not 5 Stars without romance. Maybe Author can be persuaded to add a romance of some sort? Character design seems solid, they dont all have the same personality and seem to have realistic motivations and stuff. The world background is very nice. I like the whole setting and the explaining of the world is certainly not dry. Some parts about the world are unclear yet, but I assume that the MC will find out or reveal it later in the story. So, all in all, seems like a solid story so far. But for the love of god, PLEASE add romance. Doesnt have to be fanatic or smth, just some playful banter and stuff with a gf so he wont be lonely at the top.

Please, just let him reach some village already... Conversion is nice and all, but you just literally wrote a chap thats about making food by conversion... thats just boring. The concept is clear by now.

First, writing quality. Its not good. Its readable, but as everything in this book it degrades as the book goes on. The grammar is all over the place. Cant really say much about updates, since I just binged 260 chaps. But doesnt look too bad. (this part may contain some spoiler, but I dont name anything specific.) Story... horrible. The first part is very nice, a lot of world building and focus on magic, somtimes some romantic scenes with his wife, and at some point he gets a second girl. So yeah, its ******** harem. But later on it just turns into badly written sex every single chapter and at some points the story just straight up repeats itself. Just SAY that his "essence" can heal everything magic related. It starts as a nice magic novel with some sex and romance every now and then and after 250 chaps its a badly written ero novel that sometimes justifies why he gets a new woman. Author if you read this, a harem with more than like 5 people just loses any sort of romance and is a plain ****feast. Which is fine, but then make it sound like its a ero novel and not a fantasy one. Character are the same as story, they are pretty nice in the beginning and get shallow in the end, World background as well, but it got built pretty nicely in the beginning. All in all, badly written, story degrades, has some inconsistencies every now and then, but the story itself had potential. It was nice until the like 3rd wife came.