Celleborn

Soooooo, super nitpicing here, but in the books (don't know about teh series) is said that the priests of the seven use a prims, with the all seven that are one and stuff. So they should absolutily know about the color of sunlight.

I know that you can't just give him OP skills, but there is no point to give naruto skills that he will never use (except to show off once). Put some random shit as reward, cooking skill from that anime with good food or something (I really tried to think of something else but couldn't, just think of food because of these last few chapters) or if he will keeping getting jutsus give some for ultility. Something that will continue to be useful for the rest of the story.

But no, You are far too nice, mercy has a price

'Cause you fight to save lives, but won't kill and don't get the job done

You are the worst kind of good 'cause you're not even great!

Oh, and thats funny, like I said, it did sound strange how different in quality this part was from the rest of the fic.

Sorry, but what IBV means?

Holy moly, this tranlation was bucthered hahahah, strange considering that the rest of the fic is ok.... well... it's funny

This story is interisting and all, but I getting tired of the MC personality, in the beginning was funny but now his bored attitude is getting annoying. At least have some sense of wonder, the dude travel to a fictional universe full of fantastical shit and call himself a traveler but in no point he seems to be enjoying any of it, he is just in autopilot going where the system point him to, he barely seems to care for the power ups he is getting. I not even saying that he should be a happy-go-lucky guy just give him a goal or something, show that he is traveler because he want to explore and see the wonders of the one piece world. Ok, final thing, please have any bartender deny him a drink, at least one person in the world should tell the 10 year old kid "no" when he enter a bar alone asking for booze.

This story is interisting and all, but I getting tired of the MC personality, in the beginning was funny but now his bored attitude is getting annoying. At least have some sense of wonder, the dude travel to a fictional universe full of fantastical shit and call himself a traveler but in no point he seems to be enjoying any of it, he is just in autopilot going where the system point him to, he barely seems to care for the power ups he is getting. I not even saying that he should be a happy-go-lucky guy just give him a goal or something, show that he is traveler because he want to explore and see the wonders of the one piece world. Ok, final thing, please have any bartender deny him a drink, at least one person in the world should tell the 10 year old kid "no" when he enter a bar alone asking for booze.