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Staria_10mthCommentéBooks and stories aren't written like this. It needs detailed descriptions and, most importantly feelings. You use he said, and she said but how do they say it? It should be like he said happily, she replied doubtfully, she said surprised etc. Also, describe the room describe their appearances. In essence, bring the world to life. I feel you have a very long way to go before you start writing your own books. I'd recommend that you take a year to read other people's works, actual books or webnovels. After that, I'd recommend choosing one to emulate.
Ch 2 Chapter 1: Max resumes school- Staria_10mthPosté
This is an interesting read. It's a story idea I haven't heard of, making it all the more intriguing. I would recommend expressing your ideas more concisely to keep the reader's mind captivated. Apart from that, it is truly an interesting read and I can't wait to continue reading.
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at least on a forum there are some knowledgeable experts
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😙 but who honestly wouldn't
A tear rolled. - Staria_2yrRépondu à Nj612
Haha
'Why isn't it possible to go back in the past and give your younger, naive self, a good resounding, holy slap, that contained raaage from the bottom of your heart.' - Staria_2yrRépondu à Cool_Person_6242
there's like a 24hr watch on those things
If someone saw him destroying the corpse and clearing evidence, they might be frightened to death. - Staria_2yrRépondu à Akashic_Record
there will be multiple. about 4 - 6 the number is just my guess but there isn't just 1
[You have completed the hidden divine quest: The Son of Arch-Angel Michael. Congratulations on being the first player to get a divine class! +100 to all stats.] - Staria_2yrCommenté
😄no I would do anything to go back and be able to do that 😁
Her real self was an adult in the end. That was why sitting in a trolley like a baby made her feel a bit… shameful. - Staria_2yrRépondu à Breeze_
he'll take credit but he is not leading it. he can even take the most credits if he has the most contribution.
Raymond opened his eyes, he looked at Thomas and said apologetically, "I'm sorry, General. I thought for a while and decided to go to a university. It's not that your qualifications aren't good or that you're not attractive enough. It's just that I still feel that I'm lacking in some areas. However, I will still cooperate with you in the research aspect. However, I won't be taking the lead." - Staria_2yrCommentéCh 17 We’re Looking For Raymond!
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innately?
"For the civilians, our crops will always grow in the right weather, do you know what this means? What diseases and pests will always be far away from us. We no longer need those damned non-biodegradable pesticides, and our products will be a hot commodity on the market! There will never be an economic rival! No country in the world can afford to fight a trade war with us! We will be innately invincible!" - Staria_2yrCommenté
😒🙄Or go to a library and touch all the books
Time flew by. A few days after the SAT ended. - Staria_2yrCommenté
This exam he's taking is nor even SAT's. SET'S have zero theories and definitions. Just shading. Has the author written the SAT's is this a foreign book that they're trying to make American. because who in America doesn't know the sat format.
There were all kinds of theories and definitions. He felt like he had a headache just because of these things. - Staria_2yrCommenté
The thing is SAT is just shade the boxes unless it's an essay. so what is he writing. Just shade all c
He wrote down the Qi and Blood Body Refining Technique that he had just learned on the test paper. - Staria_2yrCommenté
wrong era
[Congratulations, host! You've taken another big step towards becoming a top student!] - Staria_2yrCommenté
He said the dissaperance of his parents bothered him yet he chose the one option that didn't offer assistance with that.
Vincent bowed slightly to Harry and Miller. His choice was obvious through his actions. - Staria_2yrCommenté
He said the dissaperance of his parents bothered him yet he chose the one option that didn't offer assistance with that.
Vincent bowed slightly to Harry and Miller. His choice was obvious through his actions.