Judejayden

You cannot argue with, fantasy physics, Lol...

Don't worry all critiques are welcome. As long as you are not rude everything is okay.

It has to do with his bloodline, he his a golden lion , pride is too much.

Actually nice catch

Thanks for the recommendation.

Maybe it's not very clear. But the reaction comes from the ***** eyes in his soul. It's illusionary...or even a projection if you prefer. I suppose it's bad writing.

His eyes are hollows. No eyeballs. He can still move his eyelids.

observe as in notice, and perceive.

Yeah.. basically

Well it was a fair criticism, from the beginning I had a hard time writing him. But I think I got used to it more and more.