solakin
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pick angel and then fall.
it's those typing errors that are killing me and killing immersion. I'm at ch105 and I have to be guessing what you are saying. it would be fine if it were grammatical errors but some of the words aren't even words, they are just a bunch of letters mushed together I have to be decoding intent. usually I'd have dropped the story by now it's so bad. I'm only commenting because I like the story