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The editor forgot to mention what was it that was increasing. Sometimes it feels like territory area, sometimes resources and sometimes the wolves.. .. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I don't if it's the author or translator, but names are itself the Pandora boxes. They are just Absurd and some super Absurd and levelling for the boy is too easy and none of the team mates seem to care. He is just one punch man.
Nah it's just like Pokémon games we used to play in java cell phones ages ago.
Man, is it the same feeling one has after he reads the kingkiller series. Like I wish that Patrick had gone bald after 15 years of hiatus but still want him to publish his manuscript. [img=recommend]
Bro, I really want to crush you into mincemeat. The story was going so well and you just had to drop it. ... Also, the only major loop hole I found in your novel is this. You made it so that the whole earth is covered in dark fog or at least do gli continent is so. Then do you ever thought of what would happen when sun has not [img=faceslap]shone on an area for close to hundreds of years. It will be all frozen. Take poles for example.
This one here had a great outlook and starting theme. Man, I thought I found something to spend my time on but ..... Everything just blasted into a mess. The villains I.e. Fallen Angels can literally do anything and everything. They can summon any and every race of the universe when, author repeatedly emphasises that they are just one 9f the many successful races. They have control over a space nuke and I don't think it cost them a lot because they use it more frequently than a successful person goes on the vacation. The Mc the gets power ups and everything he needs just in time and money does not matter. He could get it from any of the four or five types of shops introduced till now. Like we have all conquering general shop then class shop, quest shops, Castle shops, auction houses, Kingdom shops and many more to be introduced. Then the gods are just a bunch of useless spectators who are also similarly all knowing. Author states that the modern chips have stopped working but I don't know why helicopters are still working along with its all systems intact. And then again Angels are and just referees but to me they seem to be amnipotent... And girls are just high on hormones....
Bruh
Though there are some national viewpoints later but it is very much damped down and you won't regret reading it. I can say I have read most urban cultivation novels and this one most readable. That name thing is just at the beginning and some of the few points. Later its not really targeted at any country and he does have many foreign friends and interactions. Don't know about the webnovel translation but the previous one was good and I had read upto more than 800 chaps at that time.
The world building is seriously a mess. At the start of the story it was said that there were zones restricted according to cultivation level when broken by higher level cultivator will bring heaven punishment. Later the hero as a qi practitioner meets foundation establishment in the beginner village. And guess the cultivator of all realms can pass through the area. No restriction at that moment. Later the story is all about the mc going to beast den, killing all the beast without any repercussion, interference at the last moment i boss fight. Winning and returning to the base city. Making new pills, that too in hundreds. Eating a few cultivation and then breakthrough. New gift pack and Holla. Repeat and repeat and repeat..
Lnmtl rocks and teaches even Novi es