Nelspie

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter!

Thabks for the update!

Thansk for the chapte…. not sure how everyone else feels, but im okay with sub-par chapters if it means the overall story arc continues. You cannot have great chapters without Having lame chapters. With that said, i still liked the chapter! Sets you up for another!

Thanks for the chapters! Good take with the LeGendaries!

Awesome chapter super stoked to see what a goos author can do creatively with Battling! Commented on a paragraph is the chapter with a typo.

Not sure how the ending sentance is supposed to go exactly seems liKe its missing a word Or two

Can’t wait!!

Thanks for the chapter! If you ever need to run ideas by somebody let me know. Lastly Towards the end Of the second paragraph there is a typo “ride” should be “rift”

ThankS for the chapter!