No gender swap tag. This is a warning for any one as excited for a skyrim fanfic as I was. ………………………………………. ………………………………………. ……………………………………….

Same

Smart. You just increased the potential of the story.

Don’t listen to any comment I wanna see the full picture you have going on in your head

Wait I just realised you did that Poseidon story. Please don’t make the mc give away his secrets or say he is reincarnated or something along those likes. MC in the other story gave away his powers and fell from grace. I got faith in you👍🏽

Shame I already gave my stones away this deserves it more

Fk I can’t remember the last time a story was so good I felt the need to write a review. The start was alright felt like eating junk food but then with every chapter being a more and more luxurious pallet till with pain I caught up to the latest chapter. Author I’m glad you deleted your story and waited a few years till you came up with this masterpiece. Please don’t drop and deff don’t delete this it would be a shame

Was great until the mc became genderbent wish the author put a tag or at least a warning. Shame this story had so much potential. ………….

So far so good I’ve read a couple of dbz stories with frost demon MCs unfortunately none of them even reached cell saga. They usually stop at freeza

If he did that he would be on the run constantly and no one would want to be associated with a necromancer

Welcome back

Haha the chapter after this review answered my question

Chapters are long don’t know about chapter release schedule but I’ll give the benefit of the doubt. Can definitely see potential. And so far everything the mc did is what I would. Hope he continues to use his knowledge of the game. I’m hoping he leans more towards being a mage. Rather than jack of all as it’s been so far

Try to cut down with nicknames as much as possible please. There are too many Pokemon stories and can’t remember all the names across all the stories

Been a week thought this was dropped

That’s it? I can understand the situation for the mc as there is always consequences but what about the joy and Jenny do they have no consequences for abusing their authority? Can he not write a formal complaint?

Love the character you built. Loved how emotional he got when the old man died. Loved how he became cold and logical when dealing with people he didn’t connect with. Wonder how he would react if one of his Pokemon(tank) died. Thanks for the chapter

I think the plot is good nothing to complain as long as the girls don’t get raped by kaido’s men or them getting tortured. And author did say they will get saved in the end.

How the hell did I miss this and how the hell is this not 5 star 4.9 is too low haha. Really author I was reading this at night and when I found out what his starter was I thought I woke up the whole house. Do me a favour and don’t drop this

Author dropped a bomb red the goat