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Apoxia16dPostéDo you like cultivation? Do you like systems? Do you like OP MCs? If you answered yes to these questions, this book is for you. First up - world building. The author does a good job of building up a world that seems more than 2 dimensional. There is always a higher heaven and a taller mountain here, along with a surprising amount of lore. Second- Character design. The MC is op. I think he might also be mildly mentally disabled, but at least he is entertaining. Side characters are mid, they die a lot and I only found myself really rooting for a couple. Overall not bad. Third - Story development. It's fairly fast paced, you won't be reading chapter after chapter of filler, the filler comes in the form of system info dumps, and take those with a grain of salt... trust me. The power systems are decently fleshed out, but the MC is on like his 3rd different cultivation system now, hoping he sticks with it... tired of him losing it all and starting over with a new OP system to cultivate. Overall not bad though, enjoying the story. Fourth - Writing quality. Small grammatical errors? Yes. Somewhat frequently calling the MC the name of the MC in his other novel, Khan? Yes (Don't worry, I commented with a star trek KHAAAAN gif on most of them for you). Sometimes uploading chapters to the wrong novel and renaming them do not unlock? Yes (batch unlockers beware). Very readable, none of it enough to break immersion. 4/5 on writing quality. Overall I give this a 4.5/5. You won't be disappointed or feel like you wasted your time reading it.
- Apoxia17dCommenté"Now that I know the sect's rules like the back of my right hand, I feel more able to breathe well in this tight place," Khan said as he dropped the law scroll in his hands and safely kept it back within his storage ring, where it could be easily pulled out for him to use to defend himself.
- Apoxia18dCommenté"Hmm, seems you are very popular, Fluffy..." Zeras said as he scrubbed the small cat's head, which currently had a prideful grin on its face as it waved its claw to Khan, as if saying, 'It's nothing worth mentioning'.
- Apoxia18dCommentéUnfortunately, Khan didn't pay any attention to her or the group, only giving them a side-glance before turning their attention towards the two cats who remained in the same state.
- Apoxia18dCommentéSuddenly, an older-looking person appeared in front of the group, his landing shaking the entire spaceship almost tilting downwards, and in his hand was the small girl that called Khan a thief as her fiery red eyes stared at Khan in fury.
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Oh shi-
There are more than thousands of different constellations in that space, Zeras. If you fusing with just one is enough to make you so strong, then imagine what would happen if you fuse with all. And technically, you should be able to fuse with all!" - Apoxia18dCommenté"Hehehe, let me show off a little..." Khan mused to himself and instantly, he smashed on the nitro button as he grabbed hold of the controller and did an absolute full turn.
- Apoxia18dRépondu à Areck
I just think of the stats screen as the show Who's line is it anyway? Where the points are made up and don't matter lol.
[Total EXP: 760,000/550,000] - Apoxia18dCommenté"Now what should I do with you?" Khan mused as he looked at the man who was sprawled on the ground.
- Apoxia18dCommenté
This stuff has made me laugh from the beginning. Mach 10 for 2 hours is traveling about 24,700km. The circumference of earth is about 40,000km. So he traveled from one planet to another by crossing a distance of about half the circumference of our small planet. To put that into perspective the moon is 384,000km from earth, so planet Humbad is almost touching Earth in this novel.
2 hrs of insane Mach 10 speed flight, Zeras skidded to a stop and his jaws dropped to the ground when he saw the beautiful green planet. It was just as he last remembered it, except the last time he left, there weren't five humongous spaceships surrounding it from all directions. - Apoxia19dCommenté"Finally..." Iruma mused as he looked at Khan and instantly, hard red scales began covering the exposed muscles.
- Apoxia19dCommenté"Because it is the only place that would make a stone-hearted like you shudder in your seat..." Khan replied as he stood upright from the computer screen.
- Apoxia19dCommentéThe room was pitch black but as Khan tapped his hands, immediately a mixture of red and dark and blue light emerged painting the room in a pretty devilish colour.
- Apoxia19dCommentéNow he had acquired a pretty good skill set and that was cooking. It sounded comical and stupid for a person like him, but Khan could say it was a better skillset than the serum making which he learned but never had the chance to put to good use. All that training and 45 days of reading just turned out to be a waste in the end.
- Apoxia19dCommentéEven though he was imbuing everything he had beneath those claws. Kain was able to keep up with every of his attack unflinchingly and judging by the smile on his face, he could sense the young man wasn't going all out.
- Apoxia19dCommenté"Hmph, it's fascinating..." The last Of the three-young men suddenly appeared above Khan as he raised the 10 centimeters hammer in his hands.
- Apoxia19dCommentéThe EIA has gained knowledge of such an experimentation, and it has been decided if it were to be successful, then not just earth, buy the entire world might fall into an apocalyptical crise. Therefore, we have decided that we couldn't make since the beginning of this organization.
- Apoxia19dCommentéAt the center of the hall, stood a single revolving chair and immediately Khan moved towards it before taking his seat.
- Apoxia19dCommentéGravity Training room, Intense Radiation Halls, Strength Measuring Machine, Mach speed measuring equipments, Robotic Cultivation Fighting. The amount of training halls in the place was almost limitless, and what Khan loved the most was there were hundreds of the same room around, which meant he could choose his pick.