I'm just some dude i guess. I have a lot of ideas in my head but often have a hard time going all the way through with them.
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Not at all. You can call him weak or naive but there are no signs of him being a bad ruler. He put faith in his council, as one should. and as I said, if he had had a son with his first wife (so there wouldn't be a succesion crisis) He would have gone down as one of the most beloved monarchs.
Please tell me we don't have yet another psychopathic mc...Of course a king can have friends. You just have to make sure who your actual friends are, and who is trying to use you. That's the case with everyone who has influence, it doesn't mean they shouldn't have friends and/or be a good person. Viserys was hopeful and naive. If he had a son, then he would have gone down in history as a great beloved king. What he couldn't handle was strife. That doesn't make him a bad monarch in general, he just wasn't the one who could solve the specific situation he was put into.
You're clearly not the creator, and there aree obvious signs of translation here and there. It's good that you mention in the description that it's a translation, but don't then say "creation is hard"....
You can't seriously believe they deserved to die because they ignored a boy they had nothing to do with? Because they were misguided, fooled, and scared? They thought that he at any point could explode and kill them all, of course they wanted him to stay away from them. It's not like they sought him out to abuse him or anything (that is just fanon). and even if a few had done so, that shouldn't condemn thousands to die. In the end, this guy is the monster they were afraid Naruto was. Besides, none of that had happened at this point. So yes, they were innocent. and the MC is a monstrous terrorist.
I didn't see the tag, soz. But even so, it's a really poor villain. Very little nuance beyond him being psychopathic. But had I noticed the tag, I wouldn't have begun reading this at all, so that's fair.
By sacrificing thousands of innocent people? Then that's the wrong way.
That was like...THE most surprising thing you could have responded with. Personally, I never stopped writing. I just..stopped being happy enough with what I wrote to publish it. Also, let your guy show some emotions. I know how hard it is to write, I never get it right personally, but try.
Yeah okay. That enough for me 😅
That might be the dumbest thing he's said so far.
Dude..You literally created a character who's a petulant child without any emotion besides annoyance. and not even in a fun sassy way. You have no real legs to stand on when you snap back at someone who calls him boring when you made him this one-dimensional.