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This story has an amazing plotline. The author has also outdone himself in creating his world background. The sentence descriptions are also well-written with minimal grammatical errors. Good job, Author!

All I can say is that I love the story. I was giggling and swooning like a teenager while reading it that I almost forgot I need to leave a review. There are minimal grammatical errors that I think can be easily corrected. And I just want to say that I really love the action scene in the opening chapter. It was really well-written. Good job Author!

The story is interesting because its different from the usual plots that I read before. Though I think that I would still like Xiao Ying to have a physical body inside the story later on (just wishful thinking😁). There are minimal grammatical errors and spelling mistakes but that can be easily corrected. Overall the sentences are well-writte and rich in details. Good job!

Although I'm not really familiar with mecha-themed plotlines, I can still say that the Author had put a lot of effort in building his world background as well as in incorporating jargons pertaining to mechanized equipments and weapons. Kudos to that! I also think that the Author has a stable grasp of good writing. The descriptions and sentence structures are well-written with minimal grammatical errors. Good job! Keep up the good work.

I think that this is an interesting story. I like the whole pre-historic concept and the world background that I want to keep reading it.I also like that the male lead is dependable and has a good head on his shoulders. Good job Author!

It's a good story. And I can tell that the Author put a lot of thought to her characters. I also like that the characters are described in details that I can actually visualize what they would look like. Aside from that, I like the female lead's bubbly personality and the male lead's tsundere personality 😀😃. They are really adorable. Good job!

For starters, I think that the author has a good grasps of writing because the sentences are well written. And just in a few chapters, the author already managed to leave an impression of what kind of personality the main character has, which I think is good. Just regularly update, and add more descriptive details to your story. Good job! and Good luck! 😀😊