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Phantom_Horse

Phantom_Horse

Lv4

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2018-09-06 JointGlobal
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  • Phantom_Horse
    Phantom_Horse2yr
    Posté

    change the cover picture. I thought it was going to be a boring story so didn't even read the synopsis for a month.I started reading it a last week after i checked the synopsis just because i saw it again for the third time and got intrested. There might be many people passing it because of the cover page.I advise you to change it.

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    Back For My Daughter
    Urbain · HaoShu
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  • Phantom_Horse
    Phantom_Horse2yr
    Commenté

    ultimate schemeing system

    Ch 98 Ruoshui Emperess
    altalt
    Immortal Hero: I Can See the Success Rate
    Oriental · Langya Shu
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  • Phantom_Horse
    Phantom_Horse2yr
    Commenté

    why did you mention that the blackmoon knights will "shake the entire border and even the kingdom".That's a spolier for the future chapters. there could have been many possibilites for the guards to become something or die, but you mentioned them being great in the future. This is spoiling the the future chapter try not to mention future results that come because of current action in the future.

    Ch 42 Winged Golden Chimera
    altalt
    My Fusion System: Fusing a Thousand Chickens at the Start
    Fantaisie · Snow Over A Thousand Hills
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  • Phantom_Horse
    Phantom_Horse2yr
    Posté

    why does the cultivation level of the MC change every chapter.At one time he has broken through a level but later you write that his going to break through the same level again.

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    Magic Deity: Godly Choices
    Fantaisie · Hundred Thousand Feet of Red Dust
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  • Phantom_Horse
    Phantom_Horse2yr
    Commenté
    Ch 645 The End and the Beginning (Grand Finale)
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    I Have A Super USB Drive
    Romance · Darkness Black Bear
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