StressOwl

gross

why are you writing two stories in the same chapter?

ph god please no, she's like a mother to him

damn, sounds like one of them realized their mistake just before dying

Can you edit it to make sure you're using the correct pronouns? he/him/his = male she/her/hers = female

she

how does he know it's going to be a boy?

why is he lying to them? it makes no sense. the lie was only supposed to he for the public. I feel like this is just a cheap set up to cheap drama later on.

last part is weird

Isn't lara a girl?