OmensHymn
Your local tentacle monster. I have a large collection of books and stories from the states, now I'm broadening my knowledge with a new and vast collection from the east.
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OmensHymn4dCommentéThat’s like 600 feet. Walking distance for a mortal is a few minutes, 3 or 5miles would be worth the price but barely
"Hmm, I think it's about 200 meters," replied Elaine, "although I can't be sure about that."- OmensHymn21dRépondu à Bookconsumer
I think the obsession gu will be able to help increase their spirit roots once it advances again. That or he needs a new gu
"Once failed, there will be a rampage of Mana, exploding and dying, almost irreparable."detailParasite (Gu) Breeding Longveity Path: Starting from the love-enamored GuOriental · Thousand Lakes True Person - OmensHymn21dCommenté
Nascent soul should be there
If he truly achieves this, he could possibly become the first Golden Core cultivator in the thousands-of-years-long history of Immortal Mist Island.detailParasite (Gu) Breeding Longveity Path: Starting from the love-enamored GuOriental · Thousand Lakes True Person - OmensHymn22dCommenté
Lord husband
"Master Husband was right."detailParasite (Gu) Breeding Longveity Path: Starting from the love-enamored GuOriental · Thousand Lakes True Person - OmensHymn23dCommenté
Gu cultivation is usually seen as a demonic path, not always but in most cases to create gu requires ingredients of various species including poison
Not only the heritage of the second-stage Pill Master, but those unfamiliar secret books could also be given to the Book Worm to consume. This would enhance the power of the Book Worm.detailParasite (Gu) Breeding Longveity Path: Starting from the love-enamored GuOriental · Thousand Lakes True Person - OmensHymn1mthCommenté
This isn’t quite right, as the individual parts are weaker than the sum when they work together
After all, a whole is greater than the sum of its parts. - OmensHymn1mthCommenté
Also not realistic, you keep saying he can’t control himself cause he’s a kid yet he controls his spending ? If he has flaws don’t make an excuse to not always have the flaw
But despite having so much money, he wore the same simple clothes that he used to wear, refusing to spend a coin over something that he deemed unnecessary. It was a force of habit, one that he had developed over the course of his harsh childhood. - OmensHymn1mthCommenté
….for loving magic he doesn’t seem to actually like it. Fuck friends, I would’ve been nose deep in every magical book I could get my hands on.
It couldn't be helped, he wasn't the best at test-taking. He excelled at the practical side of spell-casting, not the theoretical side. But to be honest, it wasn't that he wasn't proficient in theoretical tests, but more so that he simply didn't find it interesting. - OmensHymn1mthRépondu à Jesterr90
Palm sized but they can become human sized if they want to
Since he had stocked up on magic powers before leaving the academy, this also meant that he also absorbed Fairy Magic by kissing Ruby and the other Fairies in the Garden of the academy. - OmensHymn2mthCommenté
If Ethan swims as a salmon through the dragon gate will he not evolve to become a dragon ?
“Go, my little Salmon,” Mimir said with affection. “I pray that your journey against the current of time and space will bear fruit. You have suffered thousands of years of loneliness.” - OmensHymn3mthCommenté
If you murdered someone in my territory I would publicly execute you by extracting your soul.
There was no need to kill Tatjana Moiaralin. The situation was not the same as it had been when Michael summoned Cleave Fenrir. Tatjana was of no danger, whereas it had been the complete opposite with Cleave Fenrir. - OmensHymn3mthCommenté
I understand that walls won’t happen in the jungle, but are formations or magic barriers not a thing?
Michael and his people were camouflaged from enemies and gained resources from the Untamed Jungle. In return, they nourished the Untamed Jungle by removing the aggressive trees and bushes that were stealing the nutrition of the older trees. At the same time, the Untamed Jungle received various nutrients from the Greater Nature Spirit and the fertilizer brought by Michael. Whether the fertilizer was Awakened, or Native corpses or proper fertilizer didn't matter. - OmensHymn3mthCommenté
I feel like he doesn’t pay attention to his finances or romance options enough. This is a young man, and no matter how mentally traumatized he is it’s more than normal to care about those things. Especially if you are a lord, you put in a lot about how he cares for his subordinates but I don’t feel like he does. It feels more like he feels bad because he makes a mistake, not because lives are lost. He attended a school where he should have been taught basic finance and territory management skills yet he flounders like he never paid attention in class. I would love to see some character growth, because the novel is overall good. But in 600 chapters I haven’t seen the mc really care about anyone except his brother, at this point I want the brother to die just to wake the mc up.
[A/N#2: I know that I've been asking this way too often these days, but what do you think is missing about the story? Are there any major mistakes you've noticed, or things that should be mentioned more in the chapters? Your honest critique will help me improve the story going forward. - OmensHymn3mthCommenté
Huh. Thought this was a necromancy novel
Physique: Shadow Monarch Physique - OmensHymn3mthCommenté
Easiest weapons to learn and use are usually a spear, club, or mace. Swords takes years of practice to be mediocre
In the past two years, he had also devoted time to learning swordsmanship. Although his talent with swords could be considered subpar, he had managed to master basic swordsmanship during that period. - OmensHymn3mthCommenté
No need to introduce main characters with partial introduction, it’s better to give a clear distinction on age
Evan tried to calm his mind, and stood up. He appeared to be around 18 years old, with jet-black hair and eyes. His pale white skin contrasted with his hair and eye color. Standing at approximately 180cm tall, he possessed a remarkably handsome appearance, considering his power level. - OmensHymn3mthCommenté
Please stop, I have killed off MCs for less
Ethan had also taken out his Moulding Ball and transferred it into a Pitchfork, while Chloe had already summoned her Fire Fox, Kon, ready to fight at a moment’s notice. - OmensHymn3mthCommenté
So he’s spineless
The young lady with light-brown hair noticed Ethan’s gaze at her and immediately raised her clenched fist, which made the him subconsciously take a step back. - OmensHymn3mthCommenté
Rather boring
“Looks like the Dud Manor is getting a new member today,” Professor Rinehart announced. - OmensHymn4mthCommenté
He would be further along if he actually summoned people by the boat load
Fortunately, he didn't have to rush his advance to the next Tier. He was not in a rush, after all.