BanTheKitten
Decent fella, who is down to earth and just want to spend his days reading.
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BanTheKitten8dCommentéCh 25 Chapter 25: Assistance!- BanTheKitten15dRépondu à LORD_INDRA_Ch 31 Chapter 30 my luck
- BanTheKitten18dRépondu à DragonSkull27'God damn her smirk is so fucking sexy.'
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i wold recommend not using "!" so often since its normally implying that you are yelling the line. so for me when i read "Wrong!?" He is basically yelling Wrong? When in this sentence i think you meant him to casually ask what she meant with wrong. Could also just be my mistake and he is yelling Wrong as if mc had done something he should not have done.
"Wrong!?" - BanTheKitten30dCommenté
Alight i recommend making a buffer line between different characters. Like u went from shield back to Mc in no time and I almost missed it to be honest.
The little girl introduced herself to Indra as Annabelle. Indra found the name too long and Creepy for some obvious reasons, so he decided to call her Anna for convenience. - BanTheKitten1mthCommenté
Gina needs to be shown massive love maybe even break their taboo of no kanoodeling before the coming of age for them. Just no ntr.
I will make sure that the chapters ahead will be filled with more and more immoral stuff & if you have any suggestions you would love to give me to improve the quality or fix any possible mistakes, or the smuts then feel free to comment down below. - BanTheKitten1mthRépondu à KingOfAbyss
She never did from what i know. She only had Fire and Lightning and in this FF yang was added for some reason.
Chakra Nature: [Fire Style], [Lightning Style], [Yang Style] - BanTheKitten1mthRépondu à Auren02
Maybe, but then again soul realm is a lot harder to breakthrough than normal cultivation.
[Late Mortal Realm soul, upgraded to Mortal Realm Great Perfection!] - BanTheKitten1mthCommenté
Extreme Doulou* I think since 99 is limit Doulou.
Sword Douluo quietly responded, "Previously, we speculated she was only at level ninety-five or ninety-six, but now it seems at least level ninety-eight! I even suspect she might be the youngest Title Douluo on the continent, but it hasn't been publicized, hence why that position has always been occupied by Tang Hao." - BanTheKitten2mthCommentéCh 122 Chapter 122: Blue Silver Emperor Ah Yin
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Guan Ling* or whatever her full name was
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - BanTheKitten2mthRépondu à Nirerin
Also as soon as one ascends as the Asura god they become close to a godking in just godly power if i remember correctly. So who would you let slide with a little rule break, A godking or a newly appointed Ice God.
"Grow up quickly... Shui Wuya..." Her gaze fell on the Ice God Realm, swept over it, and then she disappeared too. - BanTheKitten2mthCommenté
here i would suggest that the translator/author had increased the size of these two word or did something to make them more noticeable.
Divine Realm. - BanTheKitten2mthCommentéCh 113 Chapter 113: Who is Qianren Xue?
- BanTheKitten2mthCommentéCh 162 Chapter 155: A Day Trip to Shrek Academy (Part 1)
- BanTheKitten2mthCommentéCould it be a cousin of the Husky?
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His ancestors are crying in their graves...
[Spirit: 8] - BanTheKitten2mthRépondu à Farhan1998
She won't he will go to an alternate world of another harry potter and use the necromancer class and level it up till max level (300) where he then will gain the Reviver perk which allows him to revive 300 people a year as long as they have not been dead for longer than 5 years.
Ch 26 Chapter 26: Dead!