ImmortalCockroach

I get where you're coming from. However, it’s practically impossible for him to struggle in the Blue Pole Star with his talent and meta knowledge. If he did, it would make him look foolish. But that definitely won’t be the case in the Realm of Gods, even with help from Mu Xuanyin and Jasmine, since neither of them is strong enough to back him up there. I might have been a bit lazy when handling the relationships with the other women. I’ll try to fix that in future chapters. That part of your review made me realize it.

Look on the bright side, you get to play with your niece/nephew, and when they start crying, you can just hand them back to your sister/brother to deal with! That’s the best part of being an uncle/aunt!

MTL is readable, so if someone really wanted to finish it, it wouldn’t be an issue.

It improved around 3000 chapters 'Eight Desolates' arc and above.

Nope, I’m not sure how I can add a new character there unless it’s to tell the story of their journey to becoming an Immortal Emperor. But honestly, it would’ve been better to just write an original story instead.

I read your review and took some time to reflect on my writing. While I don’t think there are too many lemon chapters (only 5 or 6), I agree that some characters came across as a bit lewd. I’ll work on adjusting that in future chapters. Thanks for your feedback, it really helped me see where I could improve.

Maybe next time.

In a good way or a bad way?

I don’t know, I haven’t read it yet.