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heliumjaxa year ago
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Thats only kryptonians
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heliumjaxa year ago
Répondu à ferferfer2
Agreed
Mia was already approaching, but she was across the room. I was much closer and was able to react much faster. I quickly used Tenfold Pain Enhancement for the first time on the man. Then, my foot blurred forward and impacted the man's groin with the force of a freight train. I held nothing back in the blow and was completely certain that having children would no longer be a possibility for this man after this. All at once his face turned ghostly pale as ten times the pain of what would already be a devastating injury assaulted him. He didn't even scream as he fell, it was clear to everyone in the building that he was incapable of the act. He could only produce choked, whining cries and moans as he rolled on the floor, face paler than that of a ghost.
Reborn in Danmachi with a Tensura System
Anime et Bandes dessinées · SaltyGamer
heliumjax2 years ago
Répondu à Slyyle
Thank y ou
Mia was already approaching, but she was across the room. I was much closer and was able to react much faster. I quickly used Tenfold Pain Enhancement for the first time on the man. Then, my foot blurred forward and impacted the man's groin with the force of a freight train. I held nothing back in the blow and was completely certain that having children would no longer be a possibility for this man after this. All at once his face turned ghostly pale as ten times the pain of what would already be a devastating injury assaulted him. He didn't even scream as he fell, it was clear to everyone in the building that he was incapable of the act. He could only produce choked, whining cries and moans as he rolled on the floor, face paler than that of a ghost.
Reborn in Danmachi with a Tensura System
Anime et Bandes dessinées · SaltyGamer
heliumjax2 years ago
Répondu à Slyyle
I put that it was a demo novel, i just released everything i stocked up overtime. I kinda just write stories on my phone when im bored until i got my laptop back.
Mia was already approaching, but she was across the room. I was much closer and was able to react much faster. I quickly used Tenfold Pain Enhancement for the first time on the man. Then, my foot blurred forward and impacted the man's groin with the force of a freight train. I held nothing back in the blow and was completely certain that having children would no longer be a possibility for this man after this. All at once his face turned ghostly pale as ten times the pain of what would already be a devastating injury assaulted him. He didn't even scream as he fell, it was clear to everyone in the building that he was incapable of the act. He could only produce choked, whining cries and moans as he rolled on the floor, face paler than that of a ghost.
Reborn in Danmachi with a Tensura System
Anime et Bandes dessinées · SaltyGamer
heliumjax2 years ago
Répondu à Slyyle
Im working on a novel that’s pretty similar to zenith, just at a slower pace. Life is kinda getting in the way but im compiling chapters to be edited and posted at a later date
Mia was already approaching, but she was across the room. I was much closer and was able to react much faster. I quickly used Tenfold Pain Enhancement for the first time on the man. Then, my foot blurred forward and impacted the man's groin with the force of a freight train. I held nothing back in the blow and was completely certain that having children would no longer be a possibility for this man after this. All at once his face turned ghostly pale as ten times the pain of what would already be a devastating injury assaulted him. He didn't even scream as he fell, it was clear to everyone in the building that he was incapable of the act. He could only produce choked, whining cries and moans as he rolled on the floor, face paler than that of a ghost.
Reborn in Danmachi with a Tensura System
Anime et Bandes dessinées · SaltyGamer
heliumjax2 years ago
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😅
Mia was already approaching, but she was across the room. I was much closer and was able to react much faster. I quickly used Tenfold Pain Enhancement for the first time on the man. Then, my foot blurred forward and impacted the man's groin with the force of a freight train. I held nothing back in the blow and was completely certain that having children would no longer be a possibility for this man after this. All at once his face turned ghostly pale as ten times the pain of what would already be a devastating injury assaulted him. He didn't even scream as he fell, it was clear to everyone in the building that he was incapable of the act. He could only produce choked, whining cries and moans as he rolled on the floor, face paler than that of a ghost.
Reborn in Danmachi with a Tensura System
Anime et Bandes dessinées · SaltyGamer
heliumjax2 years ago
Répondu à Kamosome
I agree, its just my general opinion
Mia was already approaching, but she was across the room. I was much closer and was able to react much faster. I quickly used Tenfold Pain Enhancement for the first time on the man. Then, my foot blurred forward and impacted the man's groin with the force of a freight train. I held nothing back in the blow and was completely certain that having children would no longer be a possibility for this man after this. All at once his face turned ghostly pale as ten times the pain of what would already be a devastating injury assaulted him. He didn't even scream as he fell, it was clear to everyone in the building that he was incapable of the act. He could only produce choked, whining cries and moans as he rolled on the floor, face paler than that of a ghost.
Reborn in Danmachi with a Tensura System
Anime et Bandes dessinées · SaltyGamer
heliumjax2 years ago
Commenté
I know there are no rules in a street fight, but i always found groin shots to be cowardly when used by a man.
Mia was already approaching, but she was across the room. I was much closer and was able to react much faster. I quickly used Tenfold Pain Enhancement for the first time on the man. Then, my foot blurred forward and impacted the man's groin with the force of a freight train. I held nothing back in the blow and was completely certain that having children would no longer be a possibility for this man after this. All at once his face turned ghostly pale as ten times the pain of what would already be a devastating injury assaulted him. He didn't even scream as he fell, it was clear to everyone in the building that he was incapable of the act. He could only produce choked, whining cries and moans as he rolled on the floor, face paler than that of a ghost.
Reborn in Danmachi with a Tensura System
Anime et Bandes dessinées · SaltyGamer
heliumjax2 years ago
Répondu à ArchProgenitor
What trend😭, it was random
"How would you all like to be apart of a higher power?"
ZENITH
TV · heliumjax
heliumjax2 years ago
Répondu à Daoist452371
Too week at the time
Spencer could be seen hiding behind a tree, holding the egg to his chest, waiting for the creatures to leave.
ZENITH
TV · heliumjax

ZENITH

Our MC spencer had an unexpected death by the hands of two men and was transported to a world filled with powerhouses capable of destroying worlds. wielding powers bestowed by a god, follow Spencer in his journey to the zenith. this is my first novel, I would like to give it a try and see how it goes, please give constructive criticism. to those that are telling other people to not read the novel for themselves because of a stupid reason or some randomness, or any reason in general, and without even taking into account that they are one person and people might like what they don't is disgusting and incompetent.}}

heliumjax · TV

4.5

64 Chs

The bio-hazard

This story is a concept for another novel I'm working on, I'm posting it as a means to get reviews on the concept so I can apply it to the main story. what if the world was invaded by supernatural beings from another dimension, some of these beings resembling creatures from myths and legends across the world, what if these beings brought an end to life as we know it? follow the story of Morgan, a child born in this world of myths and monsters.

heliumjax · Fantastique

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