robson_queiroz

I didn't like this development. The cool thing about tension was the skills and their names, now the author takes that away just to seem more "original", ruining the immensity of the story.

Was this really necessary? All this violence towards Saji only makes the character seem like a bully who wants to show how strong and evil he is. This chapter discouraged me from continuing to read the story.

The protagonist has a good personality so far... But with her stealing from the library, which isn't cool at all, I see that she's not as good as I thought - which is really bad in my opinion.

thanks for the clarification. Please continue writing this great work. I like the MC and the story in general, despite not being a fan of martial arts. I will continue to follow the story.

The author may have found writing this chapter exciting, but unfortunately I found it boring. I like the mc and his personality so far, but I was hoping this would turn into a martial arts fanfic. I don't like this development. I just have one question: will the focus of the fanfic be martial arts?

The story was cool so far, but everything was ruined with his idea of ​​leaving Rias' nobility. The DxD universe revolves around Rias and her nobility, taking the mc out of that part is a big mistake that many authors make.

I feel sorry for Tang San. The mc of this fanfic got the rubbish seal and young Chinese master of cultivation.

Honestly, I don't understand all this hate for the character Tang San and his teacher. All this violence against the characters in the original story is senseless and exaggerated.

When the MC asked if they were going to sell humans into the system, I started to wonder if she was just curious or was serious. I hope that's not the case, because I hate psychopathic and indifferent mcs.

Honestly, I found the dialogue between MC and the psychopathic robot to be complete nonsense - it sounds like those scary speeches given by hippies and environmentalists who believe that humans are evil in the world. And I also hate it when they criticize the heroes, in this case the Avengers, who do everything to save the world, even going as far as sacrificing their own lives.