There are some flaws, like being too fast, but I prefer it this way rather than the Naruto Gamer fanfic that takes 300 chapters to start the classic Naruto. Seriously, at this pace, the author will take about 2 to 3 thousand chapters to finish the novel. If I can choose, I prefer a fast pace as it has a better chance of delivering an ending. Thank you for your work, author.

Dude, I'm getting angry at the author of this novel. Stop wasting my time and yours with this whining. Just write what you like. Those who like it will follow you to the end. The worst part is coming here to read a chapter and finding a complaint that honestly I couldn't care less about. Let me tell you something, buddy, which from what I'm seeing you don't seem to know: there are toxic people on the internet. If you don't want to read something like that in the comments, just don't read them or stop writing altogether and take care of your mental health because it seems fragile if a comment you've never seen or heard affects you so much.

This novel deserves 4.8 stars; it's really very good so far, up to chapter 9. If you want a Game of Thrones-like novel about a much-improved Robert, this is for you.

This is simply horrible. Whoever wrote this must be around 10 years old and just learning to write. There's no dialogue, no sense of time, in fact, you practically have no sense of absolutely anything. Want proof? Read the first chapter and tell me what class the main character belongs to. Swordsman, sword god, warrior? I have no idea because this trash expects me to have a crystal ball to guess things. Man, I could keep complaining here, but I have 1000 more things to complain about. But I'll stop here, this is not worth reading.

Dude, 50% of the 80 chapters of this Fanfic are like the first day of school, the slow pace is OK, but spending 2 or 3 months in real life on the first day of school is enough to kill any reader

this MC is sooooo ..........................................................................................................................................................

So far it is the worst novel by this author, compared to other novels the force system is horrible, the worst thing is that readers try to help but the author doesn't care, just don't cry with negative criticism

I might even swallow the absurd loyalty to my brother, after all, he's family, but it started with the slavery plot, I overlooked it again, and then Garp shows up out of nowhere. Man, I realized that in this damn story there's only going to be garbage plot after garbage plot. I can't keep reading this.

jump to ch 5 and you understad my hate .......................................................................................................................

chines ?

A slave to the system, Mc cannot breathe without permission from the great and powerful system. .,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.

if you take my hermione i kill you

This is my protest against the crap I just read in chapter 290. It was so ridiculous that I had to come here to read the author's name again. Seriously, I even went to his profile to make sure it was the same author as the other stories. The author doesn't do a fantastic job, but they were pretty good. The guy just pulled a god out of nowhere, invented another dimension that no one cares about, and turned everything into garbage. I wasted my time with 290 chapters; do you have any idea how long that was? It's like watching One Piece for 1500 chapters, reaching the end, and getting a pair of underwear in a treasure chest.

kamikaze

I know man, but oda said this in SBS (interview) I only say this for you, I'm just saying that if a normal human can lift 500 kg in the anime world with a Dragon Ball Z level limit, 300 kg of calisthenics is bullshit

man, this is just an information dump, the first chapter was very good but there is practically no story. like two whole chapters talking about Targaryen I thought: this is a novel or a wiki, then there's a chapter just talking about the Roman Empire, seriously man, the author is a champion at kill the desire to read

ok man that was so stupid seriously, the stupidest plot I've read this year (apart from Chinese novels), depending on how he writes the next chapters and I dropped

simplesmente incrível ri demais. sabe ler isso me fez feliz. isso quer dizer que tem qualidade obrigado pela capitulo

more plz , i like this novel.