bamjrr

Since he got promoted to colonel, would he still be called Captain America? Or Colonel America lol

So this is taking place while into the spiderverse is going on? That’s where Gwen is I’m assuming

Goated chapter🙏🏻

You should probably stick to one form of showing dialogue. (Person: “example.”) isn’t really a good way to show dialogue, it kinda breaks your attention of the story because it sounds like your reading from a script/play. Stick to just using “” to signify when a person is talking like you are doing with the mc. Having both of those in there is really distracting.

The time line of the story, you said Daenerys wasn’t born yet

What’s the time line?

The way this chapter is written was so hard to read

Lots of spelling errors in this one champ