Immortality isn't living forever, that's not what it feels like.....immortality is everybody else dying!
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World background gets 5 stars because it's GOT, however, this story is bland with no advance... I don't know if the author is a monotonous guy with no emotions but this whole book as of now feels empty, no emotions in conversations, no progress. I don't even know what MC is planning to do or is actually doing... I also believe this is AI generated fic because the lack of simpathy in the paragraphs, I can not feel the author's emotions through them which normally I do even when it's a chinese MTL fic, I can feel certai connection to the story, but this fic is a complete void so far...
I dont know what's going on... It feels like an AI story. fake concersation, fake emotions, no build up. I really don't know what going on at this point? I don't know what Lyonel is trying to do. the conversations are stale, Lyonel talks to someone but never about something if u understand what I mean, he is just there to say hello and bye pretty much. I dont see the story advancing, no plot going on... ir's just bland... I'll keep reading and see if it goes somewhere but just by the interactions alone and the scene breaks it tells me this novel was computer generated, no author.
whats going on? is this AI generated story?
Ana de armas, Arianne is said to be petite, but with considerable bust, wide hips and perfect skin... Maybe Ana?
No, Octavia won't leave him alone, she is too ruthless and has no patience
I didnt even realize it, I guess after reading MTL novels you kinda auto correct sentences and words in your head, lol
is it the one with the matches on fire?
this guy would be proud