why fo i not remember MC ever having interacted wita Lin Yan?

How does that origin stuff work exactly? Can he hide his cultivation by 1 rank for each star rank of a beast core? like after using the 2 star wind beast cire he enters the 10tj rank dou practionionet, or half step whatever they like to tank the 10th rank. And with the 1 star lightning he can ho down to 9th star dou practitioner?

Huh? I this what I think it is? But shouldn't his countdown be a few years remaining?

I think its more on the line of brute force being able to thwart any plan that not even luck can help with. Then again why need any luck when you got the strength. Also him being avle to still draw captain-level zanpakuto in his noe "gacha" system kinda is luck in itself. It is still reatsu belonging to a captain that becomes part of his own. Even marginally that is still a massive step where others could remain hundreds of years.

weirdly enough it makes me want to continue my own bleach fanfic were a lot of those ideas were already a thing one way or another. but meh.

Lets hope here that he can change Soi Fon's attitude towards achievin bankai fast. Since her hunger for immense destructive power right now defines her later, in her words, unsightly bankai. If she manages to mellow down and focus on technique again by giving more focuse on that, her bankai may change to suit her Hakuda and Shunko style later. Learning Shunko beforehand may very well trigger her zanpakuto to adapt to that or otherwise be rather neglegted in its bankai form. Other option would be to let her get that bankai and then let her reforge it mentally. Each bankai after all represents a part of ones soul. It can also change depending onethe viewpoint the wielder has on their zanpakuto. The bleach tactical rpg for the DS made it clear how versatile zanpakuto can be when focused on what the wielder wants.

disintigration with potent ash like poison as far as I remember. Basically a godkilling weapon as its name suggests. It also bypasses pretty much any defense unlike in its shikai were it is blockable. In a sense the author sure made a rather interesting dynamic. Or rather put 1 and 1 together. In giving matsumoto a part of Gin's soul it also explaines why hers is also an ash themed zabpakuto.

why the sudden asian thing xD? this is weird anway

I think the author confused kurotsuchi and ssrugaki. Mayuri wasnt the lieutenant of the 12th but the third seat at the time. But I wonder where this is going lol

Yeah....no. I would instantly get rid of the two existing gemstones and simply destroy anthing related to it. Just simply ignore they ever existed. And if they try to threaten more with even his other invetions then I guess a nanometall ironmansuit with artifact level can easily solve that problem. Retaliation is also a solution.

You need to work on how to vary in dialogue. I couldn't follow the conversation at all. Meaning to say you can't see who talks when.

Sothoryos became skull island ? ol

Isnt Harbinger a Demon Titel lol

Hmm are both of them stuck in ASOIAF? Cause that would be an interesting take. We have a thirsty girl from the future and some dude from the past/present lol

kinda meh for some eldritch being havin such petty thoughts about those 2 stones and the phoenix. not even out of boredome can I imagine it doing what it did here. yet again, we do see a lot of horror games where it does many petty things ..... the name though....nah

farmers shouldn't have last names

lol even great sage is trolling along