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Okay I never leav reviews, but for this LN I made an exception. It has so much promise IF ONLY the author/ translator would get a good editor, who kept Track of the fucking power system!! I’m a first time reader and I feel I under stand it better!! Second the MC is a Harem protagonist that can’t seem to have a conversation with the love interest, he just make sublet glances at them and they get weak in the knees?? The interpersonal relationships and world building is trash, but the power system and world ( if properly developed and described) is the bases for a perfect LN I feel could match other greats!!! TLDR: Great concept, PLEASE GET AN EDITOR/PROOFREADER, rewrite with more character development and world building, and you have an actual 5star novel.