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Leaving this five-star review as of ch 7 since I’m not sure when I’ll be returning here… Overall, this is not a bad read. The currently available chapters delivered what’s promised by the synopsis so if the synop interested you, the first few chapters would at least not disappoint. Now, first of all, the Writing Quality. Honestly no complaints. The author is without any doubt a pro. Writing is smooth, fun, and engaging, inviting cackles every now and then. No disturbing flow, no glaring mistake that ruins the reading experience. Updating stablity. The Author uploaded 7 chapters in two days. Nice. Story development. Not much had happened in the first 7 chapters (talking about plot progression). Honestly, the pacing is too slow for my liking but I’m an impatient person so, the problem here is me. Other than that, the superb writing and humor covers it all. Character Design. The FL is THE GEM. Compared to the FL and her nonsense, the ML falls a little lackluster with the typical cold and cruel intro, but it’s still too early to judge. World Background. The basic and important ones have been introduced enough as of now. The history and the magic aspect, can be a good tool to thicken the plot and actually add some substance to the story. In conclusion, this is worthy of a five stars for me since a good book is a book that can draw the reader to read through everything and I for once, read through it all in one sitting.

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