Kyosei
Garan no dou Youkoso!
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thanks for the correction, I didn't notice it lacks the letter H
that's a typo, I already changed it back to neck, if I recall correctly unless it isn't reflecting yet
Yes, I agree with you. Some parts of the story needs a complete rewrite since some are just very confusing that even I got confused when I proofread it. I already noted the chapters that needed complete revision and those that only need a slight revision so rest assured I am already working on them.
Thank you for the review. I appreciate the honest and thorough reviews like this. And yes, there will be future chapters that will show how the MC fight before in the past timeline. As for the parents, I didn't forget about them, I already made the chapter about the result of the investigation but it was not yet published and was sitting in the drafts for now. Thank you for the critical review, have a good day!
Thank you for the review and for pointing out the inconsistencies in the novel. Since I am always busy with IRL matters, I have no time to review what is right and wrong especially in the beginner chapters. I was hoping some of the readers can point it out so that I can either change it or clarify it. Also, the grammar is like that since it has been a few years since I have written it and I have yet to edit the mistakes present. I was still a greenhorn at that time and English is not my first language. I also apologize you had trouble understanding some of it. Thank you.
I decided to put it up here than in author's notes since some of the readers will just ignore it. I usually write there but I notice only a handful read it so if I wanted to say an announcement long enough for me to explain, I just write it there. That way, they will be able to read my announcement even if they don't bother checking my author's notes
I forgot to add a footnote here, it means "Thanks for the meal."