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2018-05-28 JointGlobal
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  • EroFan
    EroFan12 hours ago
    Répondu à Readtilltheybleed

    i would have agreed with you, if I had not read past many chapters. you see, the story is bad the protagonist is terrible, the characters are even more terrible... sigh

  • EroFan
    EroFan12 hours ago
    Répondu à Arthena132

    its interesting how every trash story is thrown towards chines authors lol

  • EroFan
    EroFan2 days ago
    Répondu à I_dont_believe_it

    yeah, but anyway. i dropped it just now. story is shit in my opinion. no offense to the author intended but the characters are way too stupid for me. they just.... dont think. too illogical and brainless. the characters are almost similar and way too off from their original character in terms of how they think or act. they are also way too linear. even as an AU, its way too off. but its authors right to write however he wants of course. it just means this fic is not fot for me.

  • EroFan
    EroFan2 days ago
    Répondu à Tobi_One_Kenobi

    she is right though. i mean, how many dangerous villains have the league supposedly caught and were given fair trial for their crimes where as omniman was treated differently? lol. batman doesn't even take joker seriously and always lets hive get away for some reason even after having killed a lot, where is omniman was logically, but unfairly detained for being dangerous? its a valid point but were the other villains not dangerous then? i mean, his family was not even informed until everything fot wrong. although everything that had happened is illogical only cause of authors mistake...

  • EroFan
    EroFan2 days ago
    Répondu à TheManUnderTheBed

    you keep insisting but a lot of people can clearly see that something ain't right about MCs head. you just wrote him out too poorly. look, my father is also just a highschool graduate, but that did not make him have less common sense, or human intelligence as a whole. you seem to think that intelligence is only about having knowledge on subjects taught in schools such as math, science, etc. nooo! you are wrong if that is the case. common sense is not taught! its not even a subject. aside from common knowledge, you learn a lot of things outside if school! being highschool graduate does not limit your intelligence bro. for some reason, MC does not have the ability to deduce some things, his thoughts is like that if a child, he is not a child just cause he is HS graduate, bruh, he had been all around doing things, interacting with people and all. like man, he is searching for a garden with a golden apple, although he does not know wether its real or not, he tries, since in his logic, wonder woman exist, so other things from the myth could exist too. he has a valid point so fine, he researches, through book who know wether are real or not, lol but its still valid, its a research about myth after all, now a random person, in GOTHAM, approaches him claiming to lead him to the apple, does he feel suspicious? noooo! he just felt like "after living in gotham for so long or something like that" gut feeling? sure, fine. lol. he did not feel suspicious at all, and lets say he did, the author did not write about it! so readers are supposed to assume? how are we supposed to really know about the MC if you don't write about his thought, emotions and decisions leading to his actions? you just wrote thay MC felt bored? okay I guess that can be counted, so he is quite free willed and frivolous... he foes with them cause he was bored anyway, its still fine as it can be counted as an adventure, he is powerful so he is confident and unguarded as if the justice league is not out to get him, lol. anyway, the main subject would be when he arrives at the golden apple garden. he encounters wonder woman, who is from the justice league, who is clearly bothered about their arrival, even if he doesn't want anything to do with it, its easy to see that WW was guarding the place, so its a place if importance, so his target item is there, but in front of him is wonder woman, while beside him is a random person... its clear to see there is something going on, connected to the apple, the item he is out to get! his target is there, he is already being haunted by the league, and a member is in front of him. should he go against her and really stone out the fact that he is going against the league, to get his apple, which to MC says btw I will be good for his garden... nothing serious... its basically either you are showing us that MC is someone who does not think, lacks common sense and is unintelligent. or that, you really failed to show us anything about the MC. i mean from what I read, its the former. cause MC really is way too unintelligent. HS graduates use brains! humans gain common sense through experience. they learn to think and deduce things based in what they hear, see and read through experience, not by learning math, science or any professional subjects such as in engineering. and having lived his life in the bottom trying to scrap for money through many means, having the ability of deduction, having common sense, etc should be more prominent in MC as he lived his life in the dark side if the society compared to others who are just good at socializing and solving mathematical problems. anyway. bro is way too stupid even for a HS graduate.

  • EroFan
    EroFan2 days ago
    Commenté

    Sooooo. I guess MC is written by the author as stupid, reckless, brainless, lacks common sense, what else, butt head?, happy go lucky? MC doesn't seem to use brains at all.

  • EroFan
    EroFan2 days ago
    Commenté

    I have a problem... Batmans reason for detaining MC seems way too shallow and illogical. i cant understand how he had decided that MV will free omni-man, just cause he awakened his powers. it makes no sense. batman is not this stupid and his ability to gather intelligence is impeccable for being a normal human. his ability to deduce a lot if things is from what he can gather is also impeccable. he is smart, extremely at that, he is also almost impartial, almost. so it really doesn't make sense for him to come up with such shallow reasons to detain MC. yes, him being a 2 day criminal is a reason, and that I agree, but the crimes he did in that 2 days is light. now, in the side of being a viltrumite, I understand his cautiousness. BUT! so far, it had been shown that he was soooo hung up on MC, despite MC having not done anything much that really warrants him of batmans conclusion that he might be trying to free omniman. MC hadn't fucking done anything that leads him to his father at all! his conversation with barbara about MC makes no sense! why is it too late to explain to MC at this point? wtf?! from what I see, batman had been aware of MC and his life altrough out this time, which means he also knows the life MC had lived! cause i doubt he would take his eyes off away from MC! he would surely monitor him, prepare countermeasures ahead of time, in fact, it should have been quite easy for batman to incapacitate MC the 1st time they met! at that point, MC barely knows anything about his powers and just awakened! and batman would have not have gone to that place without investigating the previous time when barbara encountered MC and by the time he handles it himself, he would have already been prepared! anyway, batman would have known the reasons why MC was doing such jobs! its quite an easy shit to deduce! he'd probably know more about MC that MC himself! so a lot of this shit doesn't make sense!