webnovel
avatar
0
lustful_ninja

lustful_ninja

Lv4
2018-05-12 JointGlobal
-d

Écriture

-h

de la lecture

45

Lire des livres

Badges

5

Moments

1
  • lustful_ninja
    lustful_ninja3yr
    Commenté

    you should enjoy what you are doing, if you are not then take a break and rewrite another story. MHA arc may be a bit rushed but you can further improve the Naruto arc by giving side characters a bit of weight in their personalities or prospective. Overall its a good attempt.

    Ch 123 Author Note: Considering Discontinuation
    altalt
    The Universal Villain[Old]
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Aizen_Dleitch
    detail