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2018-05-12 JointGlobal
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  • salmontym
    salmontym3mth
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    Slow update speed after chapter 10. Stories seems great, just needs to develop faster. Additionally, the world building with 15 chapters published is still minimal, not sure if this is intentional, but please tell us more.

    Hunter in the Dark
    Romance · Abdihakim_Salax
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  • salmontym
    salmontym10mth
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    Looks really engaging so far. Maybe a bit early but there is a slight lack in character description/design, but it could also just be because there is not much happening yet. I love space operas so i am looking forward to this. Keep up the good work

    Hunter in the Dark
    Romance · Abdihakim_Salax
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  • salmontym
    salmontym10mth
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    Nice start to what seems like an interesting story. I love military stories and i hope this one delivers. Please keep going. Thank you

    Ch 1 Only the Poor and their Children.
    Hunter in the Dark
    Romance · Abdihakim_Salax
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  • salmontym
    salmontym2yr
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    Thank you!

    Ch 167 Preparations for the Game against Molde
    THE GREATEST OF ALL TIME
    sport · Mujunel_the_Mystic
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