Niko91

ok im onboard this story just please don't fallow can with the mc , make some changes even smaller ones. [img=recommend] ///////////////////////////////

Wow i just can't read this, i understand comic relief mc but its gets old fast every chapter , one bad decision after another , no growth no semblance of his age and system bs is overused .

He has training and superpowers gets easily handle by a tief ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I love this fanfic but if you are going for the harem route build it slow and don't just let the girls easily accept each other , make the oc work for it.[img=recommend]

Ok this story has no logic sense , i tried to be patient but this is going all over the place , garbage fire [img=faceslap] .............................................................

I usually don't like short storys but this one is perfect , like a good cone of vanilla ice cream. This story left me with a powerful craving for ice cream , i wonder were did that came from ?