Dark_Thoughts

Read a bit further on, Not really worthwhile. The author really likes to milk word count out of useless characters. What should take half a chapter to conclude, is extended 2-3 chapters. Gets kinda stale and pedantic. Also, MC thinks he’s smart, but because author isn’t smart, the actions and thoughts are completel illogical.

Not really worthwhile. The author really likes to milk word count out of useless characters. What should take half a chapter to conclude, is extended 2-3 chapters. Gets kinda stale and pedantic. Also, MC thinks he’s smart, but because author isn’t smart, the actions and thoughts are completel illogical.

Ignore the other idiot. I’ve read far enough. MC gets blocked every 10 levels or so and need to complete mainline quests to continue leveling up. No bottlenecks, my ass!

Bait and switch. summary says no bottlenecks. Inconveniently, he can not continue to level up without completing open ended mainline quests.…every 10 levels or so.

The way the author describes their thought patterns is like an alien describing what it thinks human thought patterns are.

Interesting premise, but every character is dumb as bricks. Female lead is an idiot, first villian is retarded and the main lead is not much better. All in all, infuriating and not worth reading much further.

Quality story. Good world building. Standard low key protagonist.

I thought this would be a light hearted comedy, but it’s not. Seems to be info dump stats and drops. Seems like newbie writer. He needs to work on pacing and scene development. Lack of transition and things happen way too fast without buildup. So pretty flat over all. Noticeable better vocabulary so might be original work instead of translation. Read some great works, imitate and then your scenes and transition will improve.

This doesn’t look like translation. It’s more like English speaking newbie imitating the translated recent Immortal trend. It’s not bad, although the pacing and story development could use some practice. Seems a bit rushed and thrown in your face. No time to connect with the characters. He needs to analyze how some successful books pace their plot lines and imitate that until he’s ready to develope his own style.

This reads more like a English fanfic pretending to a Chinese translation. Story and character development is nonexistent. Move on.