Spielmann
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Spielmann15dCommenténo good work, have read storys that were many times worse and that from people there native language is english
Is my grammar really so bad as to tell me to write in my native language?- Spielmann21dRépondu à kinshiCh 116 Chapter 116: London Mystery!
- Spielmann27dCommentéCh 69 Chapter 69 Exposure of the Wonder Pirates
- Spielmann1mthCommentéCh 64 Chapter 64 The Sea King Tide
- Spielmann1mthCommentéCh 32 Chapter 32: Mission Complete
- Spielmann2mthPosté
It is a interesting story anf the translation is great, with 1 chapter pro day. The MC is likeable and not the 0815 faceslapping and BS MC that you find in many Cultivations Novel. I say read the first couple chapter and make your own judgment
Ce livre a été supprimé. - Spielmann2mthCommenté
+1
5.John Wick(Short Jump) - Spielmann2mthCommenté
the story is good i like it. Do not change it^^
1. Continue the story as is. - Spielmann3mthPosté
The story title was first a little off puting but after reading 5 chapters, my first impressum is good. The writing quality is 1a. Easy to read and interesting writing style. No writing errors seen, when reading. Updates are good only a little slower in the last week. Story, Charakter and World are interesting for me. Like to read more^^
- Spielmann3mthCommentéCh 151 Chapter 151: Save people! Why do you force me to kill you, Neji!
- Spielmann3mthCommenté
only sub plot. I hate storys in there the MCs plays pokemon
°Sub Plot - Spielmann4mthCommenté
and the camera is functioning 300 meter deep, LOL.
Su Jing quickly let killer whale catch up and took out his camera to take pictures, feeling a little excited. - Spielmann5mthPosté
At the beginning the story was entertaining, but after 102 chapters it was just one repetition after another. It's always the same group of people in the Lists. So far 1 positive list and 3 negative listens. When you read the story, you quickly know that the author must have an EXTREME hatred for Doulu Dalu and really puts a negative spin on EVERYTHING. Hypocrite rank 9^^ Just because Tang-san lets other girls kiss him, he is the 9th hypocrite person in Doulo Dalu. WOW such a world must be absolutely perfect. Likewise, the people are written in 2 dimensions and are also distorted to the extreme, as if there are only good or only bad people.
- Spielmann5mthCommenté
where and when?
"At the same time, the spirit hall hunting soul beasts is evil, and hunting soul beasts by himself is killing evil soul beasts. it is extremely shameless. And there is such thoughts in his heart that, He will encounter places that can improve his strength, He made up his mind to get it. But when he got it, he was worried that others would get it, and that people in later generations would get it, so he found an excuse to destroy this place." - Spielmann5mthCommenté
correct
Tang San scolded: "This list of gods is made up in vain! Sure enough, it is deliberately targeting us!" - Spielmann5mthCommenté
were would like to bet that "The Mausoleum" is this place and it is going to be bolted, ROFL.^^
Yu Yuanzhen firmly believed: "No accident will happen. It's very strange. I don't know why my son is bolted by lightning every time. In the mausoleum, Xiao Gang will be safe and won't be slashed again. Now Xiao Gang has already been turned into ashes, so Xiao Gang can no longer be bolted." - Spielmann6mthPosté
i was waiting with the review till the ranking was finished to see what is coming after but this is no story. Now a second ranking and after a 3th and then a 4th? Only writing a little canon from other storys and reaction BS bla bla, LOL. So i say the writing quality is 1 star for no quality, a story is for me more than a little words. Story Development 1 star. Story? what story? i see nix! Character Design same! I see no Design from a charakter. World Background same. A uterly useless story with no worth to read. I wish i have this story never seen
detailTop 10 Famous Death Scenes: The Death Of Kyojuro Rengoku At The Start!Anime et bandes dessinées · Nobody2NoBody - Spielmann6mthCommenté
illogical BS, LOL! The Author is a idiot. The strongest Function of seastone is against Devilfruit user. How many Devil Fruit user has the world, against the number of normal Pirates. In the 4 Blues they people think Devil Fruits are a myth and not many know of them. So are normal Villagers really knowlegable about Seastone, i don't think so. Would be better and more efficient so sell better guns against normal pirate crews and not seastone, ROFL.
Ch 11 Chapter 11. Seastone's Impact: Umit, the Shipping King's Unconventional Business and Benevolence - Spielmann6mthCommenté
longstanding, grins. Sorry but would it be not better when you change the word longstanding to big, heavy or strong. Then for the grievances to be longstanding (LOL) it would take months or years not hours, 1day max.
Luckily, Sarutobi Asuma of the Sarutobi clan had longstanding grievances with the Uzumaki clan.