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I don't know, sorry, but if u find, please tell me, haha.
The beginning is quite difficult, it seems more like a narration of events than a story in itself, but then it gets better. The story that follows is interesting, the first one about Gaara that I really find interesting, I await future developments in case I need to change this review.
it's a fusion of two MTL: "这头巨龙太劲霸了!"(This giant dragon is so powerful!) and "吞噬世界之龙:从重生为黑龙开始" (The Dragon That Devoured the World: Begins with Rebirth as a Black Dragon). so yes, it's a translation.
It's probably not a reference, at least, besides being black, it has nothing to do with GOT, even because the original author is Chinese and the name was already that, the chance of it being a reference is minimal.
in the original there were 4
Antonio, is that you?
finally a change, after seeing you intersperse two different MTL stories with small changes here and there, finally added something new...
That doesn't make sense, carrying a chakra paper with you is already strange enough, but assuming that by chance she would carry it with her at that moment, chakra papers are extremely reactive to chakra, which means that a measly fragment of that energy would make the paper react, Kurenai is a ninja, she releases chakra practically all the time, even if she doesn't, if other people's chakra touches her during training or a fight, like her students', it would still react, in the end, the chance of her carrying a chakra paper with her for nothing, having to be careful with it all the time, is incredibly low.
The biggest reason why they prefer to use reincarnation for fanfics is because an adult mind already understands the advantages of starting early, seeing a random child start training on his own is... strange, at the very least he should get tired, give up and go play somewhere, it's the difference between Bakugo, who practically played his entire childhood and Todoroki, who was forced to train by his father. Not that it's unreadable or impossible, but if more unlikely things continue to happen it will only take away from the "reality" of the story.