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i think physical condition here should be 'fighting ability?'

its just too dark and grim. im afraid that it would turn off most readers (since the demographics here prefer 'lighter' themed novels)

best way to curse in front of teachers is to say aish shibal sikya

arigato gozaimasu! may the daoist spirit be with you

Pretty much what DreamVer2 said. Overall, just read it guys! -The writing is great, detailed and highly immsersive -As set in contemporary world it's very realistic in the way that the characters think

All I can say is good job author! that was a really vivid expression of the story. I only suggest that the title be written in capital letters as to make it look more professional. other than that, keep up the good work

Hohoho you know a gem as soon as you see it! Cant wait for all the other chapters sir author! It's a fresh concept among all these webnovels plus your ability to show is really great

Not gonna lie but this is better than the top 2 novels in the werewolf writing contest. I only read the first 5 chaps so i dont know much about romance but the action scenes really got me. The quality is simply comparable to paper bound book.

just the overall grammar has to be checked. the character is well fleshed out as a paranoid person (which is how normal people would react and personally, i like that he's normal and relatable)

yawning, arses off, (commas)