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  • arikko2018
    arikko20183 years ago
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    Thanks for posting your fanfic here! For the fanfic itself: The writing quality is average, but no great hindrance to your reading at all. The story development is good for a Naruto fanfic. The character design is a bit bland and the motivations and character developments dont get explored in depth, but still not bad. Nothing needs to be said about world background since this is a fanfiction, but some things from the original plot got forcibly dragged into the new plot. A good fanfiction over-all