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Great and unique story! My only issue is the inconsistency in the formatting and translation. It consistently ruins the immersion of the story and makes reading many chapters miserable. Hopefully the author can fix those chapters. Here is one example: (2 sentences) ‘’ “ (Two sentences) “ “ And it will be like this out of no where in the middle of a chapter or for a few chapters. Those chapters feel like scams cause you make us waste our coins for less than half the content of a typical chapter.
Holy crap this is ridiculous
You have a great story but you consistently ruin the immersion
Don’t understand why they go straight for the kill instead of diplomacy. Imagine winning the native species to your side?
I love how it goes from most flying heaven are at stage 5 to most are high stage 6
FUCK! This degree thing is so annoying! Put it back to level
Stop changing shit please, it ruins the immersion
Jesus Christ it’s not hard to put parentheses