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AbyssVentus2yrCommentémate please, look up the correct moves please don't name them yourself. Oh, by the way its a shiny gastly
Ce chapitre a été supprimé.- AbyssVentus2yrCommentéCh 23 Orochimaru
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Start of every fan fic, cant you choose another place
his parents got Married in Kalos, then moved to Kanto... guess where... Yes! the Pallet town. - AbyssVentus2yrCommenté
Osiris is also the god of the underworld
From Osiris I had gained the Authority of Life, granting me a regeneration capable of healing me from the most brutal of injuries and the power to heal others from wound or disease. - AbyssVentus2yrCommentéCh 21 CHAPTER 20: SAMSON OAK
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I don't understand that last sentence?
"It is not normal for Alec to have been able to feel the emotions of the ninetales at such a distant distance, besides those images he saw, he would understand if it were some psychic pokemon, but Alola ninetales is not this case..., *sigh*, Professor Nirio, what is what you did with Alec?" - AbyssVentus2yrCommenté
Stop using "she"
Thus, Alec became the housewife when she was in the professor's house, and his brilliant apprentice when she was in the laboratory. - AbyssVentus2yrCommenté
sharingan mate get it right
The first thing Tang Hao saw was Tang Zuo's Shalunyan. He felt a terrible aura in it, like a demon. Tang Hao used his soul power to see the true face of this Shalunyan. Item. - AbyssVentus2yrCommenté
to OP should of made it Water Dragon Or Lightning Dragon instead
[Devil Fruit: Mythical Zoan: Dragon Type: Dragon God] - AbyssVentus2yrCommenté
a male is called a sorcerer and a female is called a sorceress, I am guessing your Main character is gender challenged?
Ron would explode when he heard those words. He was finally graduating from Ban Art Sorceress school and eagerly awaiting the next words. - AbyssVentus2yrCommentéCh 1 1
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I think seperate it into two different magics for basic magic Storm God Slayer & Storm Devil Slayer Than call it Storm Demonic God Slayer Magic as a fusion
[A/N: Ideas on what to call it?] - AbyssVentus2yrCommenté
You should mention a Mandibuzz and Braviery, to avoid confusion.
Meanwhile, the egg that Bill had gifted to Tommy hatched shortly after the battle. Turned out, it was an egg of a Mandibuzz, a dark and flying type pokemon from Unova region. - AbyssVentus2yrCommentéCh 4 A Gun!