Animetine

don't most hispanic moms use mijo? Hijo is like informal or something right?

I fee like the author does a good job of background for people who don't quite know who the author has chosen to emulate with their MC. The writing quality is also top tier for the site but there are some errors here and there. The powers and scaling feel pretty equal with the Marvel universe to a believable level. The story also progresses with a steady pace and I am already falling in love with the story. I am definitely looking forward to see how the story progresses going forward. A++++ author-san please don't drop <3

The writing quality of the story definitely reads like some lame chinese translation. With all the usual culprits, like certain wording, its especially noticeable in the hero exam chapters with the whole *imaginary robot* thing and the green skinned robots. Also All mights disciple? please, that's so dumb. Updates seem ok? but its early and I think there is a lot of suspicion of this being a stolen translated work. Story development is terrible if I am being honest, the MC seems to be trying to be that cringey "cool" guy in most chinese fics. Also the typical thug types with the extras? This goes hand in hand with the Character design, I personally feel the Main character gets his powers too soon, I feel we would have liked a more drawn out skill progression story where he explores his abilities instead of becoming impossibly strong from the very beginning. Obviously the world background here doesn't really matter with pre-established ground work laid out by the creators of MHA. Overall I think my review if fair for this work, the author, if this work truly isn't stolen or a translation work I would look into rewriting the story, it has a lot of potential with a unique powerset that I feel is honestly more well explored in line with the power progression of the story.

+1

really should edit this one. seems weird to repeat what she said. don't let the ai do all the work.

loving the story so far. any plans on a patre.on?

I'm honestly surprised with this one. I love the story so far, the pain is good the chapter lengths are longer than 90 percent of what's on webnovel and the story is original. love that you used the Phoenix fruit, it honestly fits with the universe of teen wolf. the mc is also likeable while not sex crazed like most people make their stories. overall I'm looking forward to this story, author San, please start up a patreo..n with a couple advanced chapters I'd like to read more and I'm willing to pay for it. love this novel so far!!!!

surface of the sun? a quick Google search says the atmosphere alone is nearly 10k degrees celcius. which is 18k degrees Fahrenheit. the actual surface and core are measured in Kelvin because of the ludicrous temperatures reaching the millions in celcius. you put him at 4k.

how does stryker know about limitless? there were no drones there until after the fight. He only saw blue. Nowhere does it show him observing this ability. dumb.

chapters feel like they're getting shorter... this was honestly a bit disappointing. He's also being a little pushy with someone's little brother that he has literally known for a day? it's a bit weird. like, he's honestly pushed his way into her life thus far. also, why keep hopping back and forth with the food thing? is he gonna cook or order food? overall this chapter felt veeeeeery rushed and super forced.