ANY1977

what the hell is wrong with women in the fanfic and how the hell does her breaking in his house, in his bedroom equate him beeing a pervert

he already has mind protection , the system protection isn't absolutely needed at that point in time

phaahhhaha. simple and genius

i understand the higher ups like danzo and the council buy why konoha as a whole ? Indiscriminate hate burdens the soul too much.

I have one wish from you author, one wish, please there be more chapters, i need at least 4 for this arc to end on a satisfying note. And if your heart is big , please continue even after that.

next chapter may be the blood moon one and he has to survive the NIGHT

Man for fuck sake, a harem world teases psobilities. in a fanfic you should maybe choose what you want bu why do people think a harem world MUST have a harem. Some people just love the lore or power system and shouldn't be forced to include sloppy harem

while true you must understand this is the begining of the fanfic. i expect it to go for more than 100 ch. you can't create a storry without a good exposition. And most trash level fanfics, that you will forget in 1 week rush for op powers and finish any training early. With the pacing in this fanfic you start to empathise with Harry and want to see how he climbs the power ladder

the pleasure you get when you see the mc getting better, thinking outside the box, grinding, etc. snuffs out when he can wave a finger and fixes everything

maybe you are right but this was a skill ticket