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Doc_oga month ago
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considering it is translation from russian, it seems quite mild
That's how he began his research into immortality. To do this, Slytherin delved into death magic, demonology, soul magic, and everything that had already been taboo for most wizards who considered themselves reasonable in recent years. He refused horcruxes due to one hundred percent insanity. From the phylactery like Koshchei, due to the loss of the colors of life, neither food, sex, or other joys of living were of interest to a lich. He also did not want to create the philosopher's stone or become a pranic addict. And then he decided not to look for an effective way but to invent and develop one himself. His ego was truly the greatest. After reaching this thought, he set about implementing his plan without hesitation.To begin with, he wondered about the new container. As he believed that he deserved the best, the new body had to be not only strong magically, but also physically to be as deadly as a Basilisk! And that was a sure thing!!! And why not? The Basilisk's body was great, but what about communicating with people? Magicians would not easily accept his new look, and how could they cast magic in it? So, what did that mean? Right, we needed to make sure the Basilisk could turn into a human. Of course, I was slightly confused by his scale of thought, but let's not be distracted.Taking the centuries-old ritual of creating a basilisk, Salazar began recalculating it with the possibility of instilling metamorphic abilities in the future King of Snakes. To do so, he ambushed a magician from an ancient family that had settled on the Tin Islands during the heyday of the Roman Empire. This family was called the Niger. I admit that it took me some time to realize that the Niger Clan is the future of Blackie. After all, "black" in Latin is "niger," and it remains to be seen how well the Nigers have managed to adapt to local realities and become known as Blacks. "Black" sounds more aesthetically pleasing than "Niger."Salazar managed to capture the young wizard, and for several years he kept him as a prisoner, while Slytherin studied his blood structure, power and conducted research accompanied by daily examinations and diagnostic rituals. As a result, he was able to break the magic code of his genes and isolate the exact area responsible for metamorphosis. Naturally, no one let go of Nigger after that, it was simply dissected into ingredients. Having received the necessary information, he started to play with it and tried to fit it into an existing ritual to create Basilisk. Although Salazar failed to influence the embryo directly during incubation, he gave this gift to a toad which was the mother hen. To be honest, toads are creepy!Slytherin strengthened and expanded the connection between the toad and the egg, and was able to introduce an additional feature into the ritual that should give me magical abilities like those of the toad. And he partly succeeded—I did have the ability to transform, but it was weak and its development would take a long time. Decades, if not centuries. But this didn't bother the old man much. He always has several plans for everything, so if one doesn't work he moves on to another.He already assumed that the gift of metamorphism might not work, and therefore used my soul to create his Basilisk. When creating the Basilisk, he created a circle around the ritual, preventing anything from entering or leaving it, including my soul, which was needed for the creation of new life. To create the Basilisk he used a summoning to bring the soul of a human who had not been purified from Samsara's wheel, and placed me in a trap before starting the ritual. As soon as the trap collapsed, my soul entered the egg and became the soul of the Basilisk embryo.
Basilisk
Livres et littérature · Charlottess
Doc_og3 months ago
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I don`t comment at all but this time i think i should the quality of this fanfic is quite good overall it is a quite easy read too I`m not sure if the author has any experience but it feels as if he/she has plenty of it But i cant recommend this fanfic to other people on this site or fanfic readers in general, Story is based on GOT/HOTD so background worldbuilding you just cant complain about it at all Writing quality ease of read is awesome and flow of the story is amazing Main downside is that MC is just way too passive, i get not all people has grand passion but how did he become such a good warrior without a backbone. He becomes assertive then not at all, then he become quite outspoken expressing his dislike for the prince and few knight then he becomes introverted. He doesn`t have consistent character, maybe author had one idea then his own character bled into the character his writing. it is little off
House Of The Dragon-For The Queen, Not The Prince
TV · Lunacia_Yujin
Doc_og4 years ago
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Do what suits you best. Best of luck to you Though personally i hope you continue as i check if you updated everyday
Ch 54 Notice
I Click to Level Up!
Urbain · LaughingSalt
Doc_og4 years ago
Répondu à nonamejestwitness
lol avid reader of anything from trashy ffs to masterpieces like i`m superstar (well i guess masterpiece in my view)
Traveling through worlds with a nano suit
Anime et bandes dessinées · Rauon
Doc_og4 years ago
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I didn`t finish all of it so i`m a going to judge from what i just read . First i can`t say it is good, also it isn`t very bad so Not bad . The story flow needs a more work put into it . The grammar is okay i say okay because the flow is just plain bad . Simple beta-ing will make it much better than it is . Also maybe plan the each chapter otherwise the current situation is kind of makes regular readers lost . It is nothing to an avid reader but for someone who just reads for reading sake won`t get through it . It is unique and has promise
The global monsters wake up
Jeux vidéo · Kayako
Doc_og4 years ago
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Hot mess is what comes to my mind . Sudden and whimsical changes that MC makes and the story flow is just disorienting . With bit more polish and thought or thinking things through might make it better . I gave high score because it is one of the rare few stories on this site that`s unique .
The Lord Impaler
Fantaisie · Zelkolak
Doc_og4 years ago
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The score is mostly due to my own desire to read more. But i think it is by far mostly fair except the stability of updates as 3 ch is not enough to rate it. It is Marvel world background with Danny Phantom Powered Mc , so you can`t say bad things as quality of the writing quite excellent. Keep it up Author XDDDD
Marvel's Phantom
Anime et bandes dessinées · Heavens_Monarch
Doc_og4 years ago
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The writing quality is improving, But the pacing of the story is just a blur . The MC is okay, has to deal with way too fast of a pace, he does not seems to get a time to improve at a decent rate before being bulldozed into action . Maybe because it is apocalypse, the mc isnt given time at least become mid - tier power wise . This story stand out as it has a idea what it is or at least the author has an idea where this is going . Hope the author continues and improves at the rate he has.
Traveling through worlds with a nano suit
Anime et bandes dessinées · Rauon
Doc_og4 years ago
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i feel like the author is doing this to us ( the readers ) on purpose. While i`m not expert on the english , i feel as though he is making purposefully bad . If it was just completely bad i would be okay with it , but with small yet completely unforgivable mistakes ....... oh bleh
Ch 3 Start of the new journey
Pokemon - A Mystical Journey
Anime et bandes dessinées · Darthnorther
Doc_og4 years ago
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did he take the chakra tripling pill he had?
Ch 26 Genji vs Rasa
Hard to reincarnate into world of naruto as Iwa shinobi
Anime et bandes dessinées · dragon_guy