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2018-03-10 JointGlobal
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  • Doc_og
    Doc_og3yr
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    Do what suits you best. Best of luck to you Though personally i hope you continue as i check if you updated everyday

    Ch 54 Notice
    I Click to Level Up!
    Urbain · LaughingSalt
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  • Doc_og
    Doc_og3yr
    Répondu à nonamejestwitness

    lol avid reader of anything from trashy ffs to masterpieces like i`m superstar (well i guess masterpiece in my view)

    Traveling through worlds with a nano suit
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Rauon
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  • Doc_og
    Doc_og3yr
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    I didn`t finish all of it so i`m a going to judge from what i just read . First i can`t say it is good, also it isn`t very bad so Not bad . The story flow needs a more work put into it . The grammar is okay i say okay because the flow is just plain bad . Simple beta-ing will make it much better than it is . Also maybe plan the each chapter otherwise the current situation is kind of makes regular readers lost . It is nothing to an avid reader but for someone who just reads for reading sake won`t get through it . It is unique and has promise

    The global monsters wake up
    Jeux vidéo · Kayako
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  • Doc_og
    Doc_og3yr
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    Hot mess is what comes to my mind . Sudden and whimsical changes that MC makes and the story flow is just disorienting . With bit more polish and thought or thinking things through might make it better . I gave high score because it is one of the rare few stories on this site that`s unique .

    The Lord Impaler
    Fantaisie · Zelkolak
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  • Doc_og
    Doc_og3yr
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    The score is mostly due to my own desire to read more. But i think it is by far mostly fair except the stability of updates as 3 ch is not enough to rate it. It is Marvel world background with Danny Phantom Powered Mc , so you can`t say bad things as quality of the writing quite excellent. Keep it up Author XDDDD

    Marvel's Phantom
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Heavens_Monarch
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  • Doc_og
    Doc_og3yr
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    The writing quality is improving, But the pacing of the story is just a blur . The MC is okay, has to deal with way too fast of a pace, he does not seems to get a time to improve at a decent rate before being bulldozed into action . Maybe because it is apocalypse, the mc isnt given time at least become mid - tier power wise . This story stand out as it has a idea what it is or at least the author has an idea where this is going . Hope the author continues and improves at the rate he has.

    Traveling through worlds with a nano suit
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Rauon
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  • Doc_og
    Doc_og3yr
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    i feel like the author is doing this to us ( the readers ) on purpose. While i`m not expert on the english , i feel as though he is making purposefully bad . If it was just completely bad i would be okay with it , but with small yet completely unforgivable mistakes ....... oh bleh

    Ch 3 Start of the new journey
    Pokemon - A Mystical Journey
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Darthnorther
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  • Doc_og
    Doc_og3yr
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    did he take the chakra tripling pill he had?

    Ch 26 Genji vs Rasa
    Hard to reincarnate into world of naruto as Iwa shinobi
    Anime et bandes dessinées · dragon_guy
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  • Doc_og
    Doc_og3yr
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    i like ur decision not every novel should have *** scene as a matter of fact not every novel has to have romance in it also

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  • Doc_og
    Doc_og3yr
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    hello. Would you be writing for this story or dropping it?

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    I’m Harry Potter (MCU Xover)
    Livres et littérature · AlienWarlord
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