HiddenInPlainSight

I like fanfics. I want quality in fanfics as well. Do you think a story can be good if you give so much options to the MC to get stronger and without any side effects? I mean the MC got a System and a devil fruit. Would you like One Piece if Luffy was too strong in the beginning? Also, I haven't read the rest of the story but I am sure the MC won't have weakness of sea.

What do you mean? I don't get what you are trying to say.

Another Chinese bullshit? Why can't chinese writers write normally? I didn't expanded the description and started reading. But by reading this sentence, I knew this must be a chinese bullshit. Not only a System but also devil fruit? It is gonna continue making MC more option and without side effects? That is why most chinese novels are flop, even fanfics. Also, most chinese authors don't get famous. I am out of here. Not reading this bullshit.

What do you mean? They were alive from before and became clan heads normally.

The Akuro guy and the MC were in the same region, at the same day, attacking the same village. The MC is a sealing grand master and this Akuro guy took control of the building with seals. Yet no one makes the connection that both are same? Someone from Nara would have made a Hypothesis that the MC is this guy and he is hiding how he did it. It should raise a lot of doubts. Also, MC doing this when he was on a mission is plain stupid. Plot hole discovered.

I like your novel. Just that sometimes I think there are plot holes. For example, any smart person won't consider it a coincidence that on the same day that their bases were attacked another person appeared and attacked their headquarters. I think smart people will come to the conclusion that this can't be a coincidence and there is relationship between the 2 people. Even Hiruzen should become suspicious when he gets the news from spies. Also, MC pulling this stunt at the same time as he is doing a mission to take out bases is plain stupid. You are telling me on the same day 2 different people were in the same region and 1 destroyed some bases while another attacked the headquarter and they are not connected? Also, why did he act as if his other identity is from ancient era? If he is hiding his face while doing this then a smart person should think that person is lying.

Lastly, I don't think you are fan based on the questions you asked. The bast way to resolve your confusion is to watch the whole anime.

Also, this is fantasy. We are not discussing science. I know what I have written is true based on the rules described in the naruto-verse. I don't think you should look at it from science's point of view. Because if you are doing that then I don't think you should read this or other fantasy novel.

In naruto-verse, when a wind style is used to boost a fire style then it becomes part of the fire style itself. Meaning, wind by itself stops to exits and fire style increase in power, range, speed etc. So when the fire is boosted then there is no wind attacking MC, it has become part of the fire it is boosting.

I write after proper investigation.