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Faveryy

Faveryy

Lv13

Slightly shitty author

2018-02-28 JointUnited States
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615.3h

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1486

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  • Faveryy
    Faveryya year ago
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    This started out fantastic. Really great premise and a fairly intriguing main character. But, it seems I hit the wall that many others have been hitting in that it's just a slog to read throughThere truly is a point where too much of a good thing just ruins the rest of it, and of course by this I mean the romance. I can appreciate a good slow burn, but when damn near every chapter, or at least what seems that way, is filled with cheesy smut and corny lines of love, the whole thing gets dull real quickI'll definitely be checking out more works! In terms of grammar and initial ideas, as well as communication with the reading audience, I was particularly impressed, however as of right now, this one ain't it

  • Faveryy
    Faveryy2 years ago
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    I'm only a fraction of the way into this but I'm hooked hardcore Genuinely a very unique idea, and an interesting take on it as well. It being a prequel of sorts to Swtor leaves a whole lot of paths open, and it has my thoughts on overdrive trying to figure out what might come next This may update once I'm caught up with the remainder of what's up now, but so far, definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes

  • Faveryy
    Faveryy2 years ago
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    It's been a while since I've dug out a star wars fanfic as good as this one is. I'm loving the crew's chemistry and the direction the story itself is taking. Quality is great overall. My only qualm is the update speed, but as someone who used to write regularly, I get the pain of trying to keep a regular schedule with this sort of stuff I'm enjoying this very much. Keep it up!

  • Faveryy
    Faveryy4 years ago
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    I don't exactly get to say this very often, especially on the fanfiction side of this site. This piece is well written, well thought out, and most importantly, seems to be well taken care of This is definitely something to keep an eye out for, at the very least. If nothing else, the first 190 chapters hooked me in quite deeply, so perhaps it will do the same to you

THIS BOOK IS DEAD

THIS BOOK IS DEAD AND WILL NOT BE UPDATED ANY TIME IN THE FUTURE!!!!!! ~~~~~ this is a Fanfiction I'm writing for fun, if you're expecting a complex, over the top, plot twisting story, this is not for you. Again, this is for fun, there will not be any stable releases unless this becomes really popular for some reason or another, thank you~~~~~ Now then for the real synopsis, basically this dude dies, because I'm not original, and meets this god guy whoever the hell he is - gets transported into the Naruto universe and does some well uh... experimenting? Again this is purely for fun, may be dropped for some reason, or it may not. And for that reason I will be putting whatever the hell I want in here, as long as its paced correctly.. I hate stories paced like crap. So harem? sure, but only 2 per universe if I get that far, as long as I know the story then our boy'll go there. Might as well pick up a few girls around the cosmic blob that is space and time - the Naruto Universe pairings are already decided though. System? sure. systems are the only way to grow without being either really lucky or really evil.. or both Another disclaimer this will be a Gary Sue fic so if you dont like horribly OP MC's then this also is not for you If you read this far into here and still want to read then well.. Welcome aboard **********Also this will probably have a LOT of plot holes. and I mean a LOT. so like if I mess something up feel free to inform me. I may or may not fix it depending on how it looks. Thank you*******

Faveryy · Autres
4.2
57 Chs