Soul_River

He can.

I forgot, 💀

I will Check it out. Thanks for the recommendation

Well I’m trying to help the author not make him give up. His story is actually really good, just needs to polished. This is actually the first story I ever focus on like this. That’s how much potential I think it have. Instead of reading and not saying anything, I’m here giving criticism and he can improve. I think that’s more important.

Lol it’s useless if you don’t write and can’t take criticism

Something like that . I love you story but fix it and I will read it again

Truck Kun, the greatest god

They might not know what a Gu is

That is three realms lower

This book comes out and then get drop and then repeat. It is kind of boring because the mc doesn’t seem smart and the story is pretty generic.