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Probably cipher pol
Seeing red is correct. It’s a saying based on bulls rushing into red capes.
No he means ignoble as in not noble
Like fairytail
A great book with one of the best potential relationships I’ve seen. But goddamn does the author refuse to even write them as considering being together. 140ch in and theres not even an inkling of them getting together. It feels like being lead on. a great book so far but god i wish they just got together already.
To clarify the fruit is in the weapon so without some form of sentience or sapience they would not be able to active their abilities.
I think the reason only zoans worked was because without it they wouldn’t have sapience. however if the crystal is alive and he can communicate with it through the force he could probably use a different fruit type. My suggestion would be Gura/Quake because he can combine the shake with shatterpoint to shatter space. It would also allow him to use the force to generate vibrations as they can go through any medium. This gives him range, destructive power and cool factor. It also allows you to not have to kill anyone off as whitebeard is already going to die.
I like the story but for future reference you’re giving him too much too early. like the heracles and him training the kid makes sense. the memories also work. anything past that inital start has to feel earned. Like his fight with the manticore and getting the favors. that whole scenario was abrupt but it made sense. Having this whole anime protag power up scene is not at the level of the previous writing. I especially find the fact iritating because this is a fanfic and you can choose to expand on heracles power by saying something like he has infinite strength but it can only be used when you have the will to do so. You could have made a way for the initial power or backstory to scale rather than do all of this. Anyways sorry for the rant but I just wanted to give advice for the future since your story was so good so far.
He’d have to lose himself in anger to regen like that
Rather than a weapon, he should get gauntlets. Solves the flesh issue as well.
Not ramen itself but its a part of ramen.
Maybe attractive here instead of magnetic?
I read it like “sue-kai-na”
Tsunade already appeared