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Atnshadid

Atnshadid

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An idiot wasting his life.

2017-12-26 JointUnited Arab Emirates
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    Atnshadid4 years ago
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    I just didn't like this. The MC is doing quite a few things on a whim which I completely don't like. Why go out to space before maybe getting stronger a bit in a safe environment? Learn some alchemy and make money before leaving so you're prepared for everything? There was no need to rush going to space. Furthermore some sentences make no sense. “Neptune, how can you make a girl carry me?” Gu Ding’s weak voice suddenly interrupted them. Then this Gu Ding refused to allow Liliath to carry him no matter what. Left with no choice, Liliath could only lend Gu Ding an arm as she supported him all the way to the space dock. So don't carry me but let me lend on you. Like come on that's ridiculous.