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2017-12-19 JointGeorgia
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  • tigerjermaine
    tigerjermaine5mth
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    why not have him say that the card gives him a report of the creature or item to a certain extent like the more he want to know but the more info he gets from said card the worse of a headache he gets.

    Ch 14 16. How to Expose The Traitor?
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    Horreur · Kracula
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  • tigerjermaine
    tigerjermaine1yr
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    I am loving it so far keep up the good work.

    Star Wars: Clone General
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Luxuriant
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  • tigerjermaine
    tigerjermaine1yr
    Posté

    story detail and character build up is well written.

    Wizard King
    Livres et littérature · Mark_Ward
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  • tigerjermaine
    tigerjermaine1yr
    Commenté

    fix the bloody chapters

    Ch 135 Another Third-year Student
    Blood Titan System
    Fantaisie · Typhlix
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  • tigerjermaine
    tigerjermaine1yr
    Commenté

    already and alright aren't spelled liked that in the dictionary. it is spelled as all right and all ready

    Ch 5 CH_5
    Villain: Remastered
    Urbain · FictionOnlyReader
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  • tigerjermaine
    tigerjermaine1yr
    Commenté

    wouldn't she be her daughter and not her sister

    Ch 9 CH 8 - Sisters!
    Galaxy Sex Star
    Romance · AngelsEnd
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  • tigerjermaine
    tigerjermaine1yr
    Commenté

    would you all relaxe bunch a drama queens🙄

    Ch 418 Securing Asset
    HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
    Livres et littérature · FictionOnlyReader
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  • tigerjermaine
    tigerjermaine2yr
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    if your not going to stick with creating this book then don't talk about how it's not yours.

    Ch 1 Disclaimer
    Percy Jackson: Abandoned
    Adolescents et jeunes adultes · Necromancer_100
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  • tigerjermaine
    tigerjermaine2yr
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    this chapter has truly shocked and hurt us in more way's than one can ever imagine

    Ch 231 CHAPTER 222
    MARVEL: GAMER PATH
    Films · CORNBRINGER
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  • tigerjermaine
    tigerjermaine2yr
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    you keep transitioning from he to she 2nd person like the protagonist becomes he then to she back to he then to she Same thing the brother and the elebuzz that you added into is also included if the brother is a he then stick with he and if the protagonist is a she then stick with she and If the elebuzz is a he then stick with he.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3
    PokeFutas and PokeTraps
    Fantaisie · GNAR
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  • tigerjermaine
    tigerjermaine2yr
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    a very pleasant ending

    Ch 81 Chapter 81 The End
    Naruto: The Shinobi Genius
    Anime et bandes dessinées · TheEnlightenedSage
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  • tigerjermaine
    tigerjermaine2yr
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    I like the creativity so far but you could use some work on like the chapters instead putting more words on one page break them down or you could produce more chapters as you can/want to in a week that will attract alot more readers attention to your story.[img=recommend]

    testing just ignore and other novel is the actual story
    Urbain · red_rogue418
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  • tigerjermaine
    tigerjermaine3yr
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    he should tell them the truth of who he really is

    Ch 51 Rebuilding Tamaran
    Reborn as Batman's Little Brother
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Imbreak
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