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Wasn’t he called the maze runner during this race, was it a one time epithet?
I hate ships with a burning passion, but this, this right here, is something I can get behind
Honestly I really do enjoy this book. I’m currently on chapter 23 and the pacing is steady, allowing for development as well as seeing Luca (our Mac) show out when he can. The system doesn’t make him op like in most novels just allowing him to develop at a slightly quicker pace, Luca himself is a layered mc, needing to grow up young but still showing his age at moments. There are some writing mistakes here and there but all in all I’d recommend this book to whoever likes the sports genre.
loving the pace author and the development so far keep up the good work
My 3.4 review doesn't do this book justice. In all honesty it's way better, the only thing bringing the rating down is update stability. What I mean is that I want it to update more. The book itself is very well written the characters feel like real people, with real reactions, the world is slowly getting built as you read with mini lore dumps being placed with each chapter, the dumps don't feel like dumps. They are really well placed, author great job, keep em coming! 👏💯
Not going to lie, this story came out of nowhere. I enjoyed the environment the MC isn't your average edge lord, but he isn't completely sane either. A fun read so far can't wait to see where it goes.
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brother the book is just good
what do you mean by that
what did he say to his sister